The story is filled with unnecessary details that doesn’t help with the story progression.I read till 67th chapter but the story hasn’t moved much. My advice to author would be to trim the unnecessary fillers and streamline the story a bit.
Pretty good read! It's very dark and tragic, but seems like it'll get better over the course of the story. The main character has a lot of room for growth in both power and character!
It's meh. He has system that serves everything in a silver platter. He summons people from the system. He gets rewarded easily from quests. The writing quality is good but the concept and story itself is meh. It's like a shounen story but without the struggle and action and more plot armour and OPness.
I love this novel I want more of it please release more chapters and where else can I find it
The story is interesting but it’s not my kind of story. All the best author ??
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Great job, I am on chapter 10 now, and loving it. It is wonderful to think such a romance can start so fast, and smooth, even with the imperfections. Though sometimes what starts with a flame, rapidly burns out, should be interesting. It is wonderful how Yue is able to learn fast, grow stronger, and make profits so quick, in peoples hearts we often wish we could do so. It is like living an adventuresome dream.
Urghhh.. To be honest, the story was good. But how story progress was not that goodThe mc was a RETARD. The identity as transmigrator from earth was useless or no used. Well sure cliché here and there, but the mc feel so stupid.
I really enjoy this novel unfortunately the updates are extremely slow if there were more updates I would love it even more. ???????????????????????????????????????????
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It is great and really puts a lot on the aspect of love ❤️ I personally find it filled with bromance and it is filled with fast powering and fast cultivation but overall it is a thrilling and exciting story