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Have been reading this book since 2020, 4 years later and i still love to re-read it......️
When is the next update?
I love the story, but it's annoying and confusing that almost all the chapters have repeated paragraphs. Authors, please edit the book. Thank you!!!
After reading more chapters, I've concluded that I won't be continuing this novel, here's why:
Each time we get a new character, we get chapters and chapters of backstory before we even become attached or form any opinions about the present character. This is lazy writing and it's really annoying because the plot starts and stops constantly in the name of info dumping. It's a basic rule of storytelling and writing to avoid this. Second, all characters have some form of a tragic backstory, but the focus on these backstories is so intense that we lose the story's focus. At this point, I'm not sure if our Female Lead (FL) is the main character (MC) or if she's just a convenient plot device to show us more tragic backstories.
Third, most character interactions feel artificial, and our Female Main Character (FMC) is basically a Mary Sue. Lastly, the author constantly introduces new pieces of the plot without properly linking or recalling previous plot points. It feels like disjointed slice-of-life plot arcs rather than a set of arcs building a coherent whole.
TL;DR? Probably not worth your time, there are way better novels of similar genres to read.
—Original C43 Review Below—
This could be good (it's too early to tell), but so far it's just a whole lot of rude, abusive male characters who all loved or were involved with the FL's mother (who is dead) and keep abducting her because of their desires.
I do really like the FL and her approach of compromising and fighting back. It's very realistic.
TL;DR: Gotta read more for a true determination, but so far what it's set up is a bit weird and doesn't make a lot of narrative sense (yet).
The story is a short one, and the plot itself was passable. However, I personally found several parts throughout the narrative that left me deeply unfulfilled. Despite my initial hope that the unsatisfactory moments would dissipate, I ultimately felt let down by the resolution. While the overall story was decent, my inability to overlook the unsatisfactory way certain issues were handled prevented me from truly enjoying it. It's important to note that this is merely my personal perspective; others might find it an enjoyable, heartwarming tale. For me, I don't anticipate revisiting this book anytime soon.
"Here's your translator! Enjoy a crisp and captivating murder mystery with time travel elements, featuring a surprising plot twist. It's definitely worth reading from start to finish!"
Is this been dropped or something ?
It's already available on amazon
just read the synopsis it got me quite hyped then it reveals his name is sam, so underwhelming
Is this drop?
And a question for how long will the break take? It's been over a year now
And if he asks if I haven't read it yet for fear that it might be an abandoned novel ?
Can anyone recommend any other novels like this?
