I stopped at around 80. Too many dumb things happen not to mention the CONSTANT POV changes thought the story. How are you supposed to focus on the story when every other chapter is about different characters that have literally no impact on the story as it is now. When the mc made an absolutely insane deal I just couldn't read anymore. Who in their right mind would make a deal where he owed an open ended favor to not just 1 person, but 4. The worst part is that what he got in return was nowhere near worth it. The story had my attention at the beginning but just got more difficult to enjoy. The story is probably good but it hit every little thing that I hate to see in a novel.
well the beginning is best, the story is well written .some mistakes here and there and sometimes it feels like the real world but it's not. well the content is best.Very cultured content ☯️.adult scenes are well written . also MC has NTR protection so hope no NTR.well good work author.
if you like Dreamland adventure you'll like this novel the beginning is very similar currently at chapter 5 the story progress is very similar
Money!!!!!Not a fan of cultivation, but this one is really really good!!!!Very few chaps so far but I'm so excited to read more. Another excellent work from top 50 author!
Well thought out characters. Smooth writing. And a pretty big world to play with. Keep up the Job author. You deserve more than "hhhhhh." ;)
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Can't give a very well constructed opinion because the editor (if there is any) is garbage and I abandoned the novel at 10th chapter. If there is in 1 chapter few paragraphs from the middle also at the end and then next chapters are put up in incorrect order and remains unchanged event when ppl point it out in comments. Sorry but I won't suffer through it. Liked the story until this point tho
I really liked the gaming system and the characters who surprisely got me interested and involved even if it is not my favorite genre! The author’s grammar and descriptions are very cured so I totally suggest It to everyone and not just readers interested in gaming!
New experiences from the Author like you. Actually, I'm jealous of how you use those kinds of words to express your story even in a small sentence. But, at the same time, I'm amazed how wonderful is it. I'll look forward to this novel and I'm eager to see this in rankings. Good job author! Keep up the excellent work.
Incredibly excited to see where the author takes this story. Worldbuilding, imagery, characterization, and writing flow are all top tier. I’m glad I found you in the mess that is the featured pit.
While my rating may seem low I admit that I love this story. I have read up to chapter 330+ in mtl and enjoy.each new chapter. This is a story with the currently popular theme of Lords or everyone getting their own territory. the catch for this one is that the main character has a 100% drop enhancement for loot. while the story is slow, slow and even Slow! (at chapter 330 it has been 12 days) there is a fair amount of action. though the author had been becoming less hands on with the fights. The character design is mostly flat with anyone but the lead being forgotten until convenient.the positives are more about my love of systems and reading loot charts. Thanks for reading.