Generic007
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
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five stars for this book, not because of...ahem the succubus but the cultivation technique.......,...................................... . .....
Great novel, people are traumatizing with cheat so they dislike but it's a new concept in webnovel, the only thing that I dislike is because the mc talk about business and money a lot but doesn't go for these things, I hope that changes later on.Can someone give me the raw?
This is one of the best works I've found in a while. a real hidden gem. .I recommend this. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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The premise of this story is wonderful as well as the idea behind it. Perhaps it's just me but for some reason the writing comes off awkwardly. For example 'he asked interrogatingly' or 'he said assertively'. You use phrases like that consistently. If a question is asked usually it's automatically in an interrogative tone since an interrogation is just an official year for the questioning that the police do. Basically, it becomes a bit redundant in that aspect. There are also other things you can use to describe besides those adverbs. For instance instead of saying 'he said assertively', a phrase like he stated in a tone that made it clear he was serious. It's longer but it fits in and provides imagery. I am honestly not trying to Lecture of put you down because I think it's amazing to pursue your goals and consistently put in effort. It's just that I personally believe that I'd be doing an injustice by not saying anything because I truly like the premise of the book. It is a skillful blend of both modern and ancient to me.
I've only read the beginning of the story and I am captivated. The story's beginning is unique with a sense of mystery. The main character is full of energy and loves to explore and seek entertainment. Hopefully, the story will continue to be great :D
Interesting plot with superb characters. The way Thomas made conspiracies with other world people is extremely annoying and interesting. Anna's character deserves sympathy but hate too. Love Prime Minister innocence.
this is actually amazing if not perfect, but the only thing im wondering is though if they would surivive long enough to create supersonic jets/other modern technology
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The phase of the story is Getting boring Tbh... Author seems stretching 1 Chapter into 5 or more so chapters.. And Eva's and MC's reunion seems kind of lackluster... And what's with this MC? .. Can't he be more 'Honest' to his Wife?!!. .. It feels like MC didn't even trust Eva and also for the latter... Everytime MC introduces a Woman character.. Eva seems to be Overreacting and this MC reacts like TF?... Cant he be more truthful to his 'Wife'. .. Instead of worrying about His circumstances bout his wife matter... Can ignore his Adopted sister or something? ?.. Adding her into the story seems Lame and she doesn't really have worth in the story so far.. .. And I just realize that MC frequently asking soooo many questions to System... He still can't believe figure out himself dispute his 'Maturity '? He's still a Naive and Braindead For me despite those 'adventures' whatsoever. I'm quite 3njoy this for Soo long but the repeating scenario where mc always attract troubles... And him being overconfident and thinks that he has an upper hand in a fight but later realizing that the enemy has a hidden trump cards is irritating... There's no end for this scenario and I'm sure this will be not the last.. Meh.... Lame NGL..
