"Gad-dam**t Mel, it's about time you wake up. It's almost time for lunch!" (Chai)
It's nothing special. The MC's golden finger is ridiculously overpowered, but he doesn't fully exploit it, which is pretty frustrating. He collects women, but they serve no real purpose in the story other than acting as cultivation furnaces to speed up his progress. They add nothing to the plot or character development.The novel is also filled with unnecessary filler. Every chapter wastes about a quarter of its length on background characters yapping about nothing important. It adds absolutely nothing to the story.On top of that, the MC has an insanely overpowered clone ability. He can create around 100 clones, each retaining 100% of his original strength. But guess what? He barely uses it. The only thing he does with it is send one clone out to search for treasures. When facing large groups of enemies, he never takes advantage of his clones at all. Later on, when demons invade the human world and far outnumber the humans, the MC acts all worried despite how brokenly powerful he is. It’s like he doesn’t even realize his own strength.I could go on, but let’s move on. The characters are completely shallow. Every enemy acts the same, fights the same way, and repeats the same lines. It gets so repetitive that I end up skipping fights altogether. Everything feels artificial and one-dimensional, almost like the MC is in a dream where everything conveniently works in his favor.I have to admit, the beginning was good and had potential. But after chapter 300, and now at chapter 584, every arc and event feels like a repetitive cycle. The story and writing never evolve beyond a flat, one-dimensional experience. Overall, this novel had promise, but it eventually became dull and predictable, both in storytelling and writing quality.
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.
five stars and reason for that you already know.
"Aries, can I talk to you for a moment?" It's Dad.
A villain protagonist done right.? good novel
Author here I like to express my gratitude to all the readers that stumbled upon my work .I am great admirer of carthage civilaziation and espacially its famous general Hannibal Barca .So I hope for this to be a great reading exprince for you guys ..And of coure a shamless 5 star rating .
Your dear author here giving my own perspective. While this is by no means my best work, it is still the most popular one and there must be a reason for that. The reason is...systems. Yeah. I don't know if that's enough for YOU to pick up this book, but I like it anyway, because it also has arson, a psychotic bodybuilder, and freaky aliens. It's funny and adventurous with a side of MC getting a chance with women, and I like that.
Good.
this novel is deffinetly a gem. while the premise is certainly not new and the world background is not fully explored, the amazing writing quality, how alive the characters feel and their interactions makes me want to keep reading on. i cant help but keep giggling at the interactions between the main characters and am excited to see how the MC will find unique ways to get stronger evolve further as a person.
I really love the theme of the book and the goals and I like how the mc takes time to change. I enjoyed reading the chapters so please don't drop the book
The story overall is bland and boring. Writing itself is obviously not a problem but the way characters are written makes this very unenjoyable. The MC is very dumb for no reason. The Writer would rather pointlessly talk about their daily life than talk about the magic and action. It literally says, that the mc tried tons of fusions but then later says fire magic doesnt mix well. Like???? Fire has the most fusions so I think the author lacks imagination of magical abilities.