tbh it is too quickly paced but its truely is nice to read something different. it is giving me some manga vibes. lwk wish that it wasn't as violent... but i can stay for the next chapter
Kaelith you Basta*d!!!... how dare you hurt her like that.
This series looks quite promising .One can tell the author is novice but is trying to put his best in the story.The development of story is quite fast paced but ok. The power system can be more elaborated, but I guess the author has already thought about. Overall a great pick to start a new series
*author this is just a review and some suggestions only*.I have enjoyed reading your story . author I want to point out some point from your novel. your mc have many abilities but he never use them properly. he has died many times and so he has gain many abilities but you never explained properly about all his abilities and which part of hisbody has(only some abilities like aura, poison, blood breath ony mentioned) (whereas he died so many times with different things in lab in church and so he must have many abilities) (how about you specific point out all the ability he got in one of your chapter) his revive condition is only death. that means your m. c will never die? (I mean how come his sole got revived after being devored? maybe you could more explanation to actual power of m. c) after his death you have not specified any time (means how much time after he get revived since its a ability how about you give specific time after which he get revived) (what I am trying to say is your story start to contradict itself -means once you wrote he revived after few hours like 10 hours in church. but here in the pirate ship he got revived within few minutes after death I mean when floor start making hole and getting destroyed it should not be hours right? (how about write that ability got upgrade and so he he can revive faster-it may explain this) the main point is that your mc is getting more and more abilities but he never use them properly and where ever he stays he doesn't last long I mean it's nearly 40 chapter but he has stayed in habitable environment only for few years but than he is older than 10000 years I get it that he has unbreakable will but still after dying for 10000 years in space (lonly) and still no physiology change (I mean you might have to explain this bit)how about you write that he stays in specific place for longer time and he go through many incident and have character development. you have not explain how time go different in different places. power level of m. c is also in doubt (I mean whole ability idea was skill,double level? but does the skill and strength of m. c doesn't depend on level? ( I mean after he dies by someone his level doubles from the person who kill m.c ? so question here is does m. c skill does not depend on his level? I mean he dies from frog (level 5) so he become level 10 ? (now level 10 should not be where high level zone? right? now suddenly he goes see the elder who is at very high level and still at level 10 m. c aura still able to affect the elders? (I mean how? should not his ability power get low along with is level?) now when to consider whether he dies of wepon Or person? (I mean during church the priest killed m. c with knife but there he was considered dead by priest so he gain priest power. But when business man killed him with gun he get gun power(projectile). how does it considered weather he killed by weapon or person? (I mean if someone kill him with sword so will he get sword property or will he get ability from person? (explanation needed) *please do continue write your story don't drop it*
It's a very nice book and I love the world background a lot. It really got me going. And really made me feel like I'm in the book, like a virtual game.
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In how I seem to sense the story it's our Princess and knight however I don't know and any prince is their to be the male lead. I Love the characters and love the plot cleaverly knitted mystery can't wait to see it unfold. And again we will miss Annie for whole next story ??
I really cant say much exept for the fact that this is one of the best webnovels I have read and im only 47 pages in. Though the few issues with the novel is that there was no info about where it took place until chapter 43 I believe, now thats not a bad thing because it allows the auther to make it up until they know what they want, but i also had no idea about how the characters would speak which is a big part of how I see characters. Other than that im quite happy about the developments and the lesser plot armor given to the protag as I really enjoyed there being consecounses to him even if he does fight with puppets. The magic/evolution system is also well laid out and can be understood even with little information. All in all I would put this novel at a good place among the novels I believe to have more development potential than most of the more popular webnovels nowadays.
I really liked your story. The characters are all well and good. Especially the heroine of this. Good writing .................... ????
Sorry, the author, you have broken your promise. It has been a long time since you updated, and I am very disappointed. Waiting every day is very painful.
Good novel so far after 30 odd chapters. I love how you mention that all of his memories were briefly restored making it so all his knowledge makes sense. Something many novel fail to mention making it so it is unnatural for them to remember thing so early on. Keep it up.
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