can you tell me where i can find the original novel
It is a beautiful read and the mc is heavily influenced by fang yaun so you know it’s about to be peak
The book struggles a bit with some generic characters, which makes the depth of the story a bit empty, although with some solid world-building.
Great show of events. am in love with the book
I've not felt like this reading a book in a while now so keep it up you will have my support once you don't drop
finally something thats just not sprouting religious propaganda. i really like it
it's good ☺️...,............................................................................................................................
The reincarnation trope is well handled without any drama or inconsistency The MC is intelligent and likeable and the story is good paced. I recommend everyone to try it
6 chapter but yet so good ? , can't wait for more updates. Overachiever alert, you've set a new standard here for me ??
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Overall, good novel. The good: - Story progression is okay -MC's past life actually plays a role in the story, unlike some other novels -It's actually not a blatant copy of TAPOV -Grammar is okay, I guess. There's still some mistakes here and there but it's readable -VANESSA MY BELOVED The bad: -Characters that are not Alan himself are... a bit lacking. We know next to nothing about them other than their base personalities and backstories (Okay maybe Sabrina is a good character but I haven't seen her in a chapter for so long) -MC's character development ended a bit too abruptly (Which I can't really complain since I did the same thing in my novel) -Okay I can't think of anything to say so let's end it here -
First of all the MC is not an evil MC. He is your typical naive cultivation MC.But the story line is just too good. The world building, the characters and the plot , all are too good for a cultivation novel. But the main downside of this story is that the MC is carried by pure plot armor. The use of plot armor in this story is just insane. For example, once MC group was fighting an enemy group, MC group suddenly betray the MC. Then MC looked at the previous enemy group with a determined look, and boom, suddenly the enemy group was stunned by the determination of MC and sided with the MC. Then they teamed up and fight against the group that betrayed MC. Another one will be, MC is cultivating in closed door cultivation, MC made a mistake and he is suddenly on the verge of death, then suddenly a misterious grandpa appears and saves MC.These are just a few example of how insane the plot armour of the MC is.The last and most annoying thing about this novel is the character called Rui. She first wanted to manipulate MC into becoming a pill for her resurruction, MC found out about this, but he still didn't do anything about her. He just keep her with him. Then when MC enters an illusion, she try to manipulate him multiple times, but this stupid idiot keep beliving her words. It's almost sad and pathetic how naive this MC is.