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Looking forward to where you take this story
although this kind of plot is common but i still like reading this kind of story
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I have you 5 stars for the world background because when I was reading, I could easily picture the world in which our MC lives in. I also noticed that you paid attention to things like grammar and sentence structure so it was lovely to read each chapter. This novel has potential so I hope you'll keep working hard and doing your best.
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I really really love this novel! one of the best that I have ever read. ( Just an opinion, can you update more, in my point of view, this update is too slow.)
The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why
I just started reading and somehow the story is good.. though there are a bit of clerical error and its quite understanding.???keep up... uou got a nice plot and how the story progress..?
It has an interesting storyline. The plot was very intriguing. The story pulls the readers to read more of it. The story's progress was well-paced, and the placement was comprehensible. The characterization was also relatively good, but it gets shaky during conversations. However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!
Very good story .I love the MC 's character This story is full of twist and has very good potential .Need more chapters author .good work ..
The story is very engaging and the quality of writing is also good. The story progression is also good. Keep on writing and keep providing quality contests. I support you Author. I want more chapter.