Arrkein
One Word- InterestingTwo Words- Unique HaremThree Words- Vampire Main CharacterFour Words- System that awakens lateFive Words- Come on, just read it!
Since many Authors do it. I'm gonna do the same. A question and answer review.(*ignore the 5 stars). So if anyone has any questions related to anything, don't be shy, ask away. I'll be more than glad to answer your queries. Have a happy day ❤️ May happiness finds your way. ?
The writing quality has improved a lot, your plot is great and so are your characters, your book hooked me from the start and I hope to see more chaps, it has a lot of potential even with a few grammatical errors but that cannot disturb anyone ❤???
I don't know what it looks like next, but the beginning looks painfully similar to the Supreme Magus, except for a few small changes (like the food-stealing brother being adopted instead of legitimate and magic being less common) in a different world, basically took 90% of what was good in the story and replaced it with bad parts. Sorry, it sounds too negative, but you can tell how I felt reading nearly 50 chapters of this work. Note: I don't know if this qualifies as a spoiler, so I'm putting this just in case. I'm also reading on Google Translator, so I won't be able to identify the quality of the writing, nor do I plan to follow up to see if I meet the post frequency, so I put 3 stars on both to be considered on average.
I hate the MC. He is the king of retards and it is really frustrating to read this.I like the idea of the novel but the author ruined it with such a stupid, moronic and retarded MC
The MC is very annoying. He is whinny and desperately tries to be funny. Very off putting
good story. need more chaps........................... .. .. . ..............need more...............need more................need more...............need more................ need more..............need more................need more
Nice, when the first one finishes I'll run straight into the this. It's one of the top three cultivation novels there is.....................
The synopsis is really amazing! Hitomi must have a lot of survival and escape plans to survive until the end! Just enough for the readers to be hooked with this kind of novel!
And again what is with the manditory 140 characters for a review. The book has been great so far and is quite intersesting. (Seriously 140 characters)
Trash with m c trying to help protagonist pair with the heroines and babysitting him man this is so trash he has many way to earn money but doesn't. Has some kinda inferiority comples doesn't take things to get stronger and the lowlife author at first I though he was focusing so much on kumiko because she will be in ren's harem too but nah bruh it's brother and sisters lol and the grammar is trash and he says protagonist is dense? He is even more dense fc king dumb as s and why the fc k did he become aiko's assistant suddenly? And there many things. I'm on ch 38 now reviewing this
Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion
