There is a really funny book that has a very shady system. The system is rather funny with its antics. All in all it's a rather fun book to read
Every story you write is just a unique experience.It seems like you have such a magical pen at your home, huh? You presented your ideas and thoughts really well on the paper. I appreciate your talent.I wish I could write anything close to that. That’s too good!I am really impressed with your writing style. Keep it up! :)
To lazy to write anything but I like the story want more Recommend...................................................................................
This is the Author. I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel and giving me feedback. I hope t continue to write a story that you would certainly enjoy.
Nice work with the original concept!!Strong mc but not overly op. Nice background development without typical young masters.It's quite interesting having your mc with original mc too, in many fantastic of light novel mc transmigrate and start collecting mc’s harem that's just plain boring.Keep up the great work and give us some bonus chapters ?
What is with Chinese Author always making the MC in the bottom and always getting bully? Why can't they just make a MC that is average but not at the bottom. I mean we just got into the story and his getting expel from the Academy and the other students don't want to be friends with him. I mean why do they always make the MC likd this. Can't they just focus on the MC cultivating to get stronger instead of those face slaping left and right the MC can get!!!JESUS MAN!!!!!!!
This is my first time writing anything other than short stories in school. Please give this a read and tell me what you think about it. All constructive criticism is welcome. Over time my writing will improve. This is going to be a decently long story about Havok and his companions striving to achieve their dreams.
Woahhhhhhh.....This is the best!!!! This is so cool it's like a dream come true!!! I waited for days for this novel to be continued actively!! Thank you!!
I really like the mix of atg and bleach thanks for a good story and chapters hope you keep going. . .
It’s all over fellow Otaku is this novel did not get picked for translation we will never find out what happened unless we learn to speak Chinese and read. I am so very sad I will never find out what happens with this story. Good luck to everyone else that got their novel picked good day.
The book is pretty good fighting descriptions were better than average on this site (mostly due to lack of appraisal being used all the time even though the main character has it) The only other thing you need to know is that the main character is definitely 100% chaotic evil (in the sense that he only cares about himself and his goals) somewhat surprisingly he doesn't feel like a #MurderHobo though which is due to better than average writing on the authors part. The only reason I mention that is because one of the Elves he gets to help him was supposed to be because he was in the middle of being a good (selfless) and evil (selfish), which requires a being at least partially good. Never once has he cared about anyone other than his parents (since his goal is reaching them). Even when he thinks about other people it's never about them it's about how they can be used. IMO Rina would never have picked this guy.
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