Bo Jiu opened her mouth, her thoughts still in a mess. "You are gay?"
5 stars for now. It’s caught my interest.
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This story pulls you in from the get go. I love how descriptive it is. Feels more like I’m watching a movie than reading a story.
just started reading today and its more than worth it...please update faster
This is your author giving her own book a five star rating, pls support me by voting, this will serve as an encouragement to me and I would really appreciate your comments.
Novel take on Kingdom building an a system. I really like. Wish we could see 1 or 2 chapters a day though. Waiting several days is just too much.
First of all, congratulations on writing this. I liked it overall, although I felt a bit strange because of your writing style, which is not bad but still rare to see (something similar) here. Though I'm not very into heroic plots, it was an entertaining read, I wish you keep up your good work.
Story is unique. Keeps up the interest of readers. Please release more chapter .Good story, thank you for the story.Keep up the good work.If possible please do mass release
So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess.This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it hasThe story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on.The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear.Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for.Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess.World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building.Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me
it was good at first but it seems like the mc gives power away to other ppl and not himself which made him week everyone is basically stronger then him and the power scale is stupid realllly stupid
Great novel. First book and loving the flow of the story.cant wait for the next update ? will be tune in for sure?.Let support aspiring authors??☺️