He a pookie
Just a half burnt face that's all.
Ok in all seriousness, want some spoilers? Well, Nahan is quite a challenging villain if u think about the main couple's level
F*CK, F*CK, F*CK!
I just can't believe this. No f*ck*ng way, yet I know in my heart that you are simply telling the truth. Well then this story is just good potential wasted on Author's NTR fixation. BRUH... I kinda liked the plot...
I mean the next level really can only be writing your own novel, either just for you or to release, I mean that would be the only real next step you can take because you can make it exactly what you want, and if you keep it private it can be total trash (like the one I am writing for myself, first time writing something so of course it’s trash) and as nonsensical as you want but as long as you are satisfied it doesn’t matter how good or bad it really is.
I've read 2/3 of it and it kinda gets weird at the point where all the "Immortal Court" arc happens
I mean i was never really content with how fast paced it is and its just "this happend and then i got this" or like the fights are always one-sided and I like OP mc's but here it's always the same "look i made you feel like you could get somewhere and then just crush you" and lists 10 abilities
I feel like it would be better for me to just stop reading it now at the point where i feel like it was good before going to parts which I won't like and people already called a really bad ending
No comments no reviews how the hell am I supposed to know if this novel is a good read
Can someone tell me what chapter is it the different ways of knowing the true and fake martial arts here?
I have noticed a consistently fact, to wit: Chinese/Asian authors can accommodate non-humans in their stories but they prefer that blacks do not exist. This is despite the undisputed fact China has started relying heavily on Africa for a lot of vital economic resources. You people should wake up fast and drop this prejudice.
No experience in battles. I want to go to the difficult part of the dungeon. Then gets owned by two cats and then suddenly gets plot armour treasure due to unexpectedly completing daily mission then proceeds to become furious due to the pain of his injuries as if he wasn’t in pain before getting the treasure and shouts DIE. Like a 3 year old. Sighhhhh. In the first place why didn’t he choose the random treasure box for the previous 2 daily’s???? What if his needed materials pop out lol. Also finding a 90% compatibility then immediately deciding on it is so dumb. What if there was a 100% one beside it? What’s the rush? You STILL NEED TO WAIT FOR YOUR ENTIRE TO BE READY TO LEAVE THE LIBRARY ANYWAY??????!?!? I’m only like what 10 chapters(maybe less) in and it’s alr like that…
What an exceptional read, it with its compelling narrative and engaging storyline. Among them, Noah stands out as a particularly compelling character, as he not only possesses a kind heart but also continually strives to improve himself and acquire new skills to protect those he cares about. Do your best my friend.
Looking forward for this novel. Giving 5 star review for you guys.
Hello guys, Author here! Finally giving myself a self review of 4 star, because I acknowledge that my writing quality isn't perfect and my release is only around 10 chaps per week! Furthermore, I realize that my character design is quite bland for now, but that is actually on purpose! (Really!) Why? Because I plan to go professional one day, and this is my free version of the novel! So you can expect for it not to be that detailed right? (After all, I'm writing it for free lol).
After I finish this first arc (chapter 1 ~ 30) I will re-edit it (I will hire editor such as proofreaders and grammar checker) and add more flavors to the novel. I plan to publish the edited version somewhere which is a paid version (WHICH WILL BE WORTH IT!).
Will I stop publishing here you ask? The answer issssssss ~ No! I will continue to publish chapters here for free as usual, just that the quality will remain like this, and I hope that is tolerable lol.
Where will I publish the perfected version of the first arc in the future you ask? I will inform you guys about that soon! Don't worry!
To all my loyal readers, be that free or premium readers in the future, I thank you for your support and spending your time reading my work! I truly appreciate it from the bottom of my heart!
You guys are the reason why I have the motivation to continue writing! And if you really really really reaaaallyyyy love my work, I hope you can become part of my premium reader where I will create an online community specifically for us to hang around!
Until then, do continue to support me! Thank you and enjoy reading! ;)
i dont usually do reviews but this is good , doesn't have that bad Chinese patronism the Grammer mistakes are few . but most of all it is genuinely funny , all the characters are alive , they have a personality , this is definitely worth reading , and at chapter 500 it hasn't gone towards cultivation , it's sticking to it's starting theme , it has a story , an idea and not just cliches piled on top of one another