And then it happened. Her heart melted. And she was moved. Completely moved.
Chu'mei turned and gave Feng Ju a competitive look. "Bet!"
"Take your time my dear...huh! In fact, if you are able to clear this challenge of mine I have a reward that you are definitely going to love!"
As each day went by, more and more of the scenario inside the dreams started to play out more slowly. However, no matter how clear a scene was, Jin can't see the face of that little girl fully at all.
To be free and unbound in Jianghu, you need either great backing or power. Possessing neither of those would only result in being bullied and killed. It was simple as that, just like you need power to survive in the slums. You need enough strength to make the other party feel they will lose out if they ever fought if stealing your house posed no consequences, well, these ruffians would gladly do that.
rght then someone kicked invisible dragon he was still young so it hurt and he was weak so it hurt so he cried and got angry
(Read till ch 70)Firstly this story has excellent translation quality with nice depiction of scenes without any annoying errors unlike many translations out there.Now coming to story, personally I have really enjoyed some of cases fought on mc's personal ability and little help from mystical ability from transmigration.Although there are some plot holes in the character development of mc considering his past especially his habit of hitting many of beautiful women except that story is quite nice.I especially loved all the chapters of cases fought even though they had some of stupid moments from opposition of underestimating mc or belittling him with speech and then routine face slapping but overall cases were decent enough.Due to its shortcomings but still overall nice story, excellent translation quality and regular update schedule till now(100+ chs), this deserves a solid 4.5 stars ?
Writing quality is nice 4/5. Stability of updates is cool 4/5. Story development... from his first fight to the point he could relax the check his status page you need to read 20 chapters of info dump and pointless interactions in order to make the info dump needed. I would have called this a slow burn but its not even that. its not burning at all so 1/5.. To call it dark is wrong. It's sick. SAW level sick. clear and detailed explanations of butchering character's somehow reads like high school biology. Again it's not dark it's sick. MC is an idiot. somehow sounds like autistic or some other brain-damaged childish murderer. while still around 30+ years old he is describing murder and blood childishly. World background is way tooooooo much detailed way too much. so even after 30 chapters all you'll understand is it's a post-apocalyptic world where demons are ruling and humans became livestock. So overall i do not recommend to sane ppl who likes to read some nave villainous and/or dark fantasy. But if you are into gore and butchering go for it. Defiantly not my cup of tea. best of luck to author.
love this book. I hope for many more updated from the author. I just started and caught up reading today so can't really speak on update stability. There is no grammar errors I seen so far and character design is all great. Don't see too many future setting novels with a alien mc. My only gripe with the story is that the mc is useless right now but this wouldn't be a weak to strong novel with out a weak mc starting out. Just hope this picks up within so many chapters or the story will fill too slow not saying you should rush either author. To a thousand chapters.
Amazing storylineOutstanding character design
Not bad but far from perfect. I like "!!!" and "???" their chemistry is good. You have some grammar mistakes. There is a lack of description of the looks of the characters and setting. Paints a pretty foggy picture in the reader's mind. Keep writing and improving!
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