Looks interesting reminds me of The Authors POV, bookmarked waiting for more hopefully a mass release so I know the real potential of this story, very excited.
The writing style is good, the characters are appealing. Liked the events in the first chapters and eagerly waiting for more!Grammar good and regular update schedule.
This novel description Sayed that every one could choose their talents but what is the difference between him and the other if that is so ?????
Wow I cannot belive how good this was I cannot even describe how much I enjoyed it I would even argue that the author is better than J.K. Rowling great work
Came in with somewhat high expectations. It's not even readable as wish fulfillment. Idk how the author managed to do this tbh I'm impressed, it's like they messed up every part that could've been enjoyable.
The story was very good and the character design is awesome ,it is very hard to translate the story but with a lot of effort you made it .my small request is to make the story some more interesting and attractive so the people will still get attached to the story . Hope you will make it ????
This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant.My reason;Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out.It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little.For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process.The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story.That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher.That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading ?
so far the story is really good and very interesting.Mark's growing and learning to fend off the zombies overall this shet lit that's all i can say.
New chapter is nice. I love the fact that ChaRacters had a Sad past. My fave character is Reinhard coz he chosse to be hurt than to hurt others.
Couldn't put it down loved the characters and the storyline so it's a well deserved five stars and I would recommend this book to everyone can't wait to read more in this series
that is a f***ing Interesting idea for a story premiseif this story has decent adversaries and predicaments, then we are gold........,............ .................................mmm
Future event synopsis ruined it for me. Not a big fan of that. It was a major spoiler.I Wasted my time reading this.___________________