do not waste your time reading this story unless you are new to reading we novels on this site. Every single character is braindead, naive, and cliche. The premise isn't used in an interesting or satisfying way whatsoever. And the plot is so trash a 5 year old could do it better. absolutely nothing about this is worth reading about.
just an extra warning, this does NOT get better. I've skimmed the raws and Victoria also ends up going psycho as a result of a series of very convoluted, messy time travel shenanigans. she ends up 'cheating' on him but not really but also does (when Victoria goes missing and leaves with Jordans brother to reunite with her father (normal clarke), Jordan believes that the Howard's have her captive so he agrees to marry Lauren in order to gain info on her location, upon learning of their soon to be marriage a distraught Victoria seeks out Jordans brother and sleeps with him.... later we find out its actually just Jordan's alternate identity from when time travels back to the past.. so Jordan ends up cucking himself and therefore getting front row seats to Victorias infedility. Naturally this causes him to be repulsed by her. This leads to a rift and eventually them splitting up, then..... emotionally wrecked she marries his uncle lol.... (whom she was previously comforted (not sexually) by during Jordans supposed death
I honestly feel it's jumping the gun making the book premium so soon and that's why I've decided to make my review. Slight spoilers btw.The writing can get very repetitive, using the same words and identifiers constantly within the same paragraph. Character and story are also pretty generic. Kid died, got reincarnated, finds out he has a OP system, the works. As far as the MC goes he's about as spicy as flour. No motivation beyond "getting stronger" after they get invaded and he sees his parents die, it's now "get stronger to get revenge". His dialouge and interactions are pretty meh as well.. It's fight scene, talk about how crazy the fighting is during the fight, then eyyyyy I got some stuff, rinse repeat. Conversations are stiff and don't really add much, there is even a section where he and his father do entire conversations from looking at each other. Overall the writing quality is average, the world building is kinda interesting, almost more so than the main story line at times. But at barely 50 chapters with a pretty lackluster story and these issues I feel the author is riding off his success with other novels. His promise of a Mashup of novels seems to be the end goal and to me he's rushing there at the cost of the story.
The story for so far is going well including the character development. The world development is awesome.
First chapters are confusing. It gets better after 4-6chapters.MC has a background of one of 4strongest families of empire.Since childhood he is swimming in expensive resources. All of it is one big golden spoon. Magic is build on foundations of resources and that gives mc advantage on every lv because his family is reach.
Interesting storyline. the plot is rather unusual. I wonder what will happen next? this is not a typical fantasy story! Please keep updating <3
Did Webnovel really write a novel, about someone writing web novels, for a fantasy Webnovel? This shamelessness goes beyond the mortal realm and touches upon the divine.
why is he racist I was just reading out of boredom then he just becomes racist I don't understand why out of nowhere either the person who wrote this racist or some sort of translation error or it could be the wherever this person is is racist but I don't know.
the storyline is very interesting. i would suggest using adequate paragraphing. even though there are a lot of cultivation novels, this one is very interesting.Waiting for more.
Some really good stuff hereAlthough im only like 10 chaps in, i have to say this is a gemI also love how author is confident in his storyAnd rightfully soIts that goodKeep up good work. Saved in library and will continue to read
Translation becomes machine translated starting at chapter 170. Do not recommend reading until its fixed to normal translation. A pity. It was a nice novel before that. Will Review as 1 star to shame this decisivo. Would otherwise be around 4 stars.
The story is so captivating, the book name is so addictive it pulls you in. 8 love the plot development and the characters development, it's so unique and different. Keep it up author ❤️?