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Beautiful book!
Just wait until the prince grows up
The language is impressive, and descriptive. Also, Alexander is intimidating and rude D:<
Liking this book so far!
nice story, keep going! :) if you have any social media to keep up with your readers, please let me know ;)
I love this book...️...️...️ I recommend it to everyone out there ...️
I recommend this novel to you all, it's interesting and funny. Kudos to the author..
First, only read this if you're in the mood for an anti-cliché webnovel. If you’re not that kind of reader, you might find this novel disappointing.
Second, overall, the web novel is quite good. It creates a coherent world with its own set of rules, avoiding many plot holes. The plot is well thought out, featuring an intriguing duo who are complete opposites on a quest to save the world in the most challenging way possible. This setup breaks many tropes, especially compared to typical isekai stories where the main character (MC) lives an easy life in another world due to being overpowered.
The issue arises with the execution. The jokes and interactions start to feel repetitive around Chapter 15, which might bore some readers. Even if you manage to push through, there’s another problem: character development. Instead of improving over time, the characters often regress. This is a significant reason why many readers give it a one-star rating—nobody wants to follow a story where the characters become worse. While the execution of character development has its merits, it’s not without flaws. It might work for me, but it could annoy many others.
**Spoiler**
The hero isn’t just cautious; he’s a control freak. Imagine making an extreme control freak your protagonist—it’s that bad. Conversely, the goddess is excessively carefree. This imbalance often leads to dangerous situations, exacerbating the hero’s controlling tendencies. The goddess never learns from her mistakes, which makes her frustrating, especially since she is also an MC. If this pattern continues, the control freak might reach his breaking point, leading to a dramatic explosion in later chapters. At this point, it becomes very difficult to continue reading because both MCs are problematic. While side characters help balance the atmosphere and tone, the poor execution of the main characters leaves a bad taste in the reader's mouth, explaining why many people abandon the novel.
Fourth, the interactions within the world are well done. However, the novel’s anti-trope approach and consistently strong, harsh tone can sometimes make these interactions feel too extreme in various situations.
In summary, if you’re looking for a novel with its own unique identity, a slightly slower pace, and an anti-trope narrative, this might pique your interest. But only if you can tolerate the character development issues first.
Edit: Many people rate the novel poorly because they find the goddess annoying, calling her names like "b*tch" or "dumb." This is understandable, given that their attitudes are often extreme, and without any characters to balance the story’s tone, they can become very irritating.
"Beautiful Love indeed! I'm overjoyed, it was such a heartwarming experience. I think I'll have a smile on my face for weeks to come. This is my second novel I attempted to read with machine translation, and it was worth it! I plan to reread it once proper translations are available, though I'm a bit disappointed I don't have the skill to translate. Someone please take it up if you're interested *whispering*.
Ran Ran and Lucas, what a charming and bumbling duo. Their love story unfolded不知不觉, despite starting earlier than they realized. Initially, Admiral comes across as intimidating, short-tempered, and irrational, but as the story progresses, we see his adorable clumsiness and deep bond with Luo Ran. They share many emotional moments and a shared history, which might explain why their feelings only became clear after their 'unplanned encounter.' It's amusing how the entire Empire shipped them without realizing it.
Their relationship is powerful and supportive, with Admiral's heartfelt confession being both hilarious and touching, knowing every detail about his secretary, from her favorite color to her quirks. The plot itself was engaging, even though I guessed some parts due to its simplicity, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. The story had a satisfying resolution, and the side couples added a delightful touch (I won't spoil those details for you).
I'm still buzzing with happiness - it's hard to express how much I adore this couple. A truly delightful read. Someday, I hope to experience their love story in its full glory, without the limitations of machine translation – I'm sure it would be twice as sweet!"
thanks a lot! you're a savior.
a masterpiece