its lack luster.. if you don't have anything to read then try otherwise not worth it.. there are many more novels with similar setting who have done a far better job than this
Hmmmm.... was the writer hit in the head ? summoning talents are fine but... asking them to teach ?? Shakespeare was a writer and there are no records of him being a good teacher.. same goes for Einstein, curie, gauss they were researchers not teachers, so it'd be fine if they were brought to research/invent/theorize and all ..
Hi, I'm the author.*All reviews here came 100% naturally because I never ask for review swaps.*The story has no system, no incarnation, no transmigration, no "one man gets many girls." 1 male will have 1 female love interest, and you will see how they interact.*There are funny moments in their dialogues. :-D*The goal of the story is to highlight issues and people overlooked by the real world. The "cases" or "problems" in my novel are based on REAL history or TRUE crimes. The characters will try to solve those extraordinary issues together. (If you're curious, feel free to ask which one is based on what).I'd appreciate your support! And I hope I win the contest! :-)
After reading up until the last chapter, I finally understand why the synopsis is like that. It is indeed ****** and thought provoking. It is a collection of mini stories that usually last for 1-3 chapters with different genres that's why it can't be generalized to make a synopsis about, afterall the stories are very different from each other. I was kind of laughing at the synopsis at first when this was still being voted but looking back, the synopsis really says it all... Give this novel a chance, it might just pick your interest like it did to me.
The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...
Full of repeated plot lines. I don’t care which book came first or second. But I see that there are shït tonne of repeated plot lines. What do u expect a immortal cultivator who has immortal body to do in modern world? Even if they self imposed to not steal or resort to criminal activities, there are lot of ways. But, it’s China, so strut ur stuff in front of old acquaintance or exes, go to the antique shop, have something to do with makeup, oh and find a rich family to cure them of something....I bet there will be stone gambling too. Things I like: MC is not a teenager or young adult that looses his shít next second a 2D side character comes. And love the daughter character. Author did a good job of padding with words.
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This novel is really cringey and the MC is so damn beta it's frustrating. He acts like your typical Japanese beta cuck MC. I also dislike how he keeps mentioning his scummy past but never talks about it. Apparently even until the latest chapter, we still don't know what he did. At first this novel was pretty interesting, there was a lot of potentials, but the MC singlehandedly ruined it all because he thinks it's "cheating". This type of self-righteous MC shouldn't exist. It's a sin, and it's literally why there's so many garbage novels out there.
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This is a all around 5 stars from me the story how it develops and the action scenes are amazing and I cant wait to read more of it in the future this is a great book for those who want to have action while the character gets stronger steadily and it is also for those who want a mc that can be aloof sometime and caring others!!!!
Dropping after 40ish chapters.I just can't get into this one, was hopeful when I saw all the good reviews. Characters feel really 1 dimensional, I really cant describe anyone's personality other than MC and his grandfather. Even those two feel like cliches. Also the goat momma stuff is kinda off-putting.
If you like exposition, useless fillers, repetition, excessive repetitive descriptions, and eventually plot movement every tens of chapters....this is for you. It had potential, but the writing style just screams filling out word count.