All good and amazing at mortal world arc but all thing got hectic once MC went to immortal civilization. The story got more incoherent with previous chapters. This kept happening for hundreds of chapters. No explaining on how and what got him on some situation that you have to backtrack some chapters still confusing how they connects to ongoing storyline. Its still worth reading mortal world arc for those who are interested if they have no other novel to read they find interesting
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(Review 150 chapters+)Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast. Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated. SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER): In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy?? On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda. Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.
The book is just starting and it's already wonderful, I'm expecting much, so please don't disappoint me on this one too. You know what we like.
This author always surprises me with her marvelous, well planned and executed stories. This time she has come up with a mysterious - thriller story which is not less than a drama series to me. Writing quality is excellent to me. Each and every word forces you to dive deep down in the story. When I read the chapters, it felt like I am inside the story so, you can see the author's skill to picturize the events. Mr. Herbew is the detective here who will solve the murder cases and believe me it makes me recall the series Sherlock Holmes?. The world background setting is done in a well planned manner and the way story is pacing is also good(neither too fast nor too slow). So, please without giving any second thought pick this gemstone book, add it into your libraries and enjoy reading it. Thank you author for coming up with such a story. Saranghae♥️
This story overall is actually not that bad but it's fascinating this is like alternate history hub you know the YouTube channel. Also this story literally imagine what life can be like.
This is nice, i liked this more than the manaless one, having a fun time beeing a fate reader, so i'll give my powerstone and maybe another review later one
I love this novel so please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel should definitely be picked up. Easily one of the best novel in recent time. The synopsis doesn’t do it justice, making it seem just another novel in this genre. It seems to draw inspiration from Overlord. The world building, lore, characters, translation, magic system/ mechanics, action are all top notch. I highly recommend reading this novel. I think it can easily reach a top ranking like The Legendary Mechanic.
the description makes me think of the mc fighting other protagonists with different tropes which i love!..............................................................................
please continue this unlike the previous one don't stop it. The character and slow paced story is good.
urghh... this is so bad(but relatively better than other new novels). i will try to summarise the whole thing in a sentence. [the mc achieved, what other spent years doing, within a week, and he did it without having any money/resources/effort/guidance]