Author kun plz do a mess release this novel is sooo good!!!
People who love to watch Kdramas must read it. #kdrama #cdrama #drama The story is just amazing but updates are very slow and once in a while
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So, I did try to give this story a try and it shows some promise. My main issue is how passive the MC is, this on top of the fact it has no tags makes me worry.To many good books have been ruined by massive MCs, I get wanting to build up the MC and show them grow into their role. However, with the personality of most of the females around him it makes me hesitant to continue reading.It is an interesting idea behind it and once it has tags or some sort of guarantee that The MC will change. I would be willing to come back and give it a second shot.
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I took my time to finally read it, as I said I would before.Well, take this review with a grain of salt since I'm someone who doesn't like harem stories.Yes, my first issue is with the 'all girls are falling for MC' problem. That truly irritates me, but some people might like it.What about the mc's previous life friends? So far, only five years passed on Earth, right? How come only women keep appearing? Other than you typical villain men, the mc doesn't have a single friend of the same genre. It's all women, women, and more women. Is that even possible? At the very least, that was the case until the chapter I stopped reading.What about his real wife? Like, she is happy he came back... but that is all she feels... It's like she simply doesn't care at all about what happened in the last five years he was gone. It's all 'I'm happy he is back.' 'everything will be fine now that he is back' those are basically the only thoughts in her head. I thought she was supposed to be a much stronger woman after living the challenges of raising a kid five years alone. Suddenly, she became a broken doll out of nowhere.Last but not least, the descriptions. I truly can't emphasize with overly descriptive stories. I don't need to know how beautiful or run-down a place is to its minimal details. All I need to know is that it looks bad or good. Unless the description of a place or things like that is necessary for the story itself, all those detail are completely meaningless. I literally jumped at least 30 to 40% of the paragraphs in the chapters I read because I already knew that it was all a bunch of unnecessary words. I want to read a story, not an architecture project. Give, me, a, story!Of course, there were good points in the story too:Writing quality. It is definitely much better than my own books. Hahaha! I have nothing to complain in this department. Updates are fine too. They are consistent as far as I can see. This is definitely the point of a good author.The story itself had potential, at least when I read the synopsis. It really caught my eye... until the problems I mentioned appeared.PS: This last part is basically a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the author or the story. Anyway, the thing about Chinese names everywhere, including the cultivation world the MC came from. I mean, come on! What are the chances that the guy was Chinese and everyone in his world were all Chinese? The chances are ridiculously low, but that's exactly what happens. Remember, chances wise, that shouldn't be the case at all. As I said, this is just a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the story. If the author wishes that every single stone has a Chinese origin, it is fine.
Well, a new world has been opened to us, while the author has shown us the imagination with the new concept of the world, writing can be improved further, way to go author.
I loved the plot very much, it was a new experience. The writing is awesome. I learnt many things from your work. I'll look forward to your next update.
not bad, but neither is it good. the book follows the reincarnation of the MC in a fantasy world. This book has the same premise as epic of caterpillar and goblin evolution. While the character is logical he is also only pseudo ethical. Basically his morals are pretty loose and his bottom line of what he will do is pretty low. Much like the books above the MC gains power by assimilation of his enemies. The MC also gains followers by saving them or forcing them to submit, he never actually wins anyone over the any other way. Based on what I've read so far, writing quality will probably start to suffer as more characters are added, as current cast already lacks depth. Writer does attempt to build side characters through doing pov chapters for them, but it all just seems like feeler material and doesn't really connect you with the character. Lastly there are alot of they that should I or him that should be I or her. Grammar errors kind of take away from the story. Over all this is a decent story that is replica of novels already on the site.
hello author, when I read your novel at first I was boring and the story was a bit cliche with the case of the young Chinese master,.. but I read on and on actually this story is quite interesting, and if possible I hope the author can update the next chapters quickly, so that the readers you can be more flexible in reading your work... oh yes and if you can, you can show more scenes of 18+, so that readers can be even more energetic, greetings reading, yes, everyone does think this is trivial, but it has its own charm for me authors,....and I also hope that this will have a netoric scene that the MC will seize the woman who saves time in the hospital, and I really hope that author... I have imagined that a woman named Emma is very beautiful and sexy, and I hope she can be a companion mc hahahaha...
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