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I love this kind of novel. Hope you didn't drop this novel. Just don't make Sam's students too op. That will make this less interesting. Also, I would like to see Sam taking a student with low potential or average potential.
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I don't normally read romance novels but this might might worth a try I've read a few chapters and it feels a bit rushed in places while a bit slow in some other places. It would be better to fix that.
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1.4star for writing ,little grammatical mistakes. 2.4star Nothing much to see for development in 10 chapters3.1star Here comes the system, reading every line is so painful that I have equipped myself with large what ofH2O4..4star fine5.4stars Ever watch the show The Boys, it's 70℅same
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Personally, I think confidence and morale are critically important. I placed this review here just to reflect that.As of now, the story isn't really face-paced. Ideally, I think it would be better to increase the pace but I also don't want to compromise too much on the details or risk creating plot-holes.I do re-read and check things to minimize the plot-holes as much as realistically possible.I also take constructive criticism very seriously. I will try to incorporate every comment that seems feasible and beneficial for the story's growth.Overall, this is a long-term project with a lot of potential.
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the story concept is interresting, the world around it could use some more work, the romance ... are man really this dense? or did i just oversee the dense protadonist tag? the romance also makes me feel like the mc is somehow gay or stuck at the age of 10 mentally. even the children have more EQ then him. just looking at his dungeon name. how can he not relayse till now what a morningwood is??leaves me with the question: what did he do at school, because in todays society even they know.sadly the only thing keeping me going for now was the interesting farming concept.to the autor, don't let my critice put you down. i belive with more work you will surly get better over time. just use the readers view to better yourself, every start is hard. but also do not allow everything we write to you, its your story and your idea. put warning in the prologe this way no one can complaine to you later for ignoring them.best wishes and continue writingps english is not my native languagr so please excuse the mistakes. thanks