Zoro10271
As a dedicated fan of your works, I just have to leave a review, no matter how simple and short. Great plot, dynamic characters. Can't wait to see how Mian will go about using his new powers.
Average Novel...there are already a novel like this in orginal and that is popular.bit better then this but mostly Same.so I don't see spend my money and Time on something that already available in this site
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follow a guy who claims he will be the villain. When you read the villain Mc tag you are sure that the mc will be a villain then you get to see a hero mc with a bad personality. You wait and wait thinking it will get better because there was a villain tag the mc might turn into a mc villain but no what awaits you is pure dissappointment
Started out good but I do not approve the direction in which this novel is going. I've gotten to chapter 170 in the raws and the MC is still alone in his shelter. There is almost no human contact which makes the novel terribly boring.There's almost zero sense of growth in the MC. He behaves the same as when he just started.No emotional issues as well which is not what you would expect in an apocalypse novel. He spends days alone in his shelter and even his first kill did not bother him.Overall, the novel becomes terribly repetitive and uninteresting due to the complete lack of relationships and character growth. Do not read.
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Though I had read only a few chapters but they are enough to hook me up. World Background- The world setting is really Exhilirating. I liked the way author gave a detailed info about everything. character setting- Characters are good. it's not hard to relate and understand their views, which I found good because it helped me to connect to the story. plot setting- The plot seems to be revolving around the royal and castle things, which is a nice one. I liked the plot setting. The only thing which somehow poked is there are way too long paragraphs and dialogue are incorporated into it. which somehow becomes boring to read for a longer times. and also the explanation is quite much. Rest all the things I loved about it. keep it up author, written in a good way.
The idea was good. The execution was terrible. The MC is nothing but a child. The plot is predictable and downright cliche. There isn't really anything that makes me want to read more
This is nonsense. I really don't get the point... Most of the story focuses on streamers playing the games and people reacting to them, with a few bits and pieces about the MC, which aren't interesting either. I don't know who this story appeals to...
A synopsis that doesn’t stink of clichés? No perfect but unhappy protagonist, loser protagonist, betrayed protagonist, untalented protagonist, or any other cringe worthy protagonist settings? Not to mention the mature level of grammar shown, but isnt this too good to be true?
My personal in depth review, (SPOILERS AHEAD so read at your own Caution, TLDR below) TLDR: Please heed my advice and don't waste your time reading this novel, I know I regret these last few days. Where should I start. I read up to about 900 chapters and then spoiled myself a bit further on to confirm one of the reasons I dropped this novel. Before I begin, I would like to mention that I think the overall grammar and spelling throughout the novel had been really good and I didn't notice much mistakes or sentences that flowed weird and the world building was also pretty good and in depth of the various kingdoms and what not. However that's pretty much all this novel has to offer in my opinion. I wanted so desperately to like it, that I kept reading all the way up to 900 instead of dropping it earlier on like I wanted to. I'll list some of the moan things that personally really destroyed this novel for me. There's so much unnecessary garbage filler of side characters and mini arcs we just don't need. There just do happens to be another side character also from "earth" who already had his harem established before MC (lol), and then some random jojo memes thrown in which just threw off the pace. Wish Drake was never introduced anyways. Speaking of harem and r18 scenes in general, our mc doesn't start building until much deeper in the sorry which is fine I didn't mind the wait, that is until every other stupid side characters were given harems AND r18 scenes before the MV even got his first girl and even after the fact it is just absurd giving so much attention to these side characters when we are here for the MC. Examples: Drake Blackburn and his harem, Danius and his harem, Lucas and his harem, and so many other characters we (or at least I) don't care about at ALL. What was the final straw for me and really cause me to drop was around chapter 900 Logan fights Nora and of course they start to develop romantic feelings which I spoiled myself on (she is added to his harem). Imagine the whole reason they traveled to the Alstreim estate is to enact Claire's revenge on them and one of the main people behind her father's crippling and etc. Nora, who is then added to Claire's husband (Logan's) harem after they met for the first time and had a battle where he then "saves" her for some reason even though his supposedly love of his life hates her. Absolutely ridiculous, functionally makes no sense, and the final straw. In my sincere opinion, I would recommend you all to stay away from this novel and most importantly do not waste your time. I spent a few days getting to chapter 900 and I deeply regret it, however thanks for the ride stardust_breaker, even as unenjoyable as it was I have no doubt you will gain more experience and write a better novel in the future.
Take my 5 stars, take my 6 and 7 stars. This novel is the reason I came to webnovel, I read it on a friends account first, then I decided to create my own account to keep reading. I love this book and will continue giving it my power stones. Give it a try, if you don’t like it that’s fine, but don’t just brush it off.
