Me personally, I love systems as they bring you into the video game-like world and takes you away from reality. As of chapter for it's been a good read with a likable male lead. Certainly a story for one to kick back on a Friday afternoon and enjoy. I'll update more as I read more but so far, keep up the great work, writer!
A system book why you level up as you battle obstacles. Story development isn't forced and how it started really drew me in. This is actually my first system book and I'm enjoying it. I read all chapters and will be waiting for more.I must add that the structure of the world background helps you to imagine it as you read.Author did a great job and I will be waiting to read more.
Not that happy that this didn't make it through to be selected, has great potential and hope it either gets picked up later or by someone else.I like this storyIt has some great potentialwe can only hope
Tbh was starting to like this novel until the romance happened, that **** ruined it for me. I mean he could’ve tried finding someone while in his adventures rather than be with a milf...
This story had me run the gambit of emotions . It captured my attention and held it there. The plot twists were amazing and unexpected . I Really loved this book.
If you like paragon of sin, you will like this to certain extent, The main character cucks the lucky son of plain for a reason, the MC do act smart
absolute ****, immensely retarded mc, beta to the point he wont even ask any questions if some one beats him to death, does opposite things of what others says and gets into trouble, no power levels information from author, actually so little information that mc feels more retarded than he already is, and even if hes weak as **** he'll try to go to somewhere to face last boss. all in all ****ed up mc, if you can tolerate this, you should read this novel
Nice concept and plot! This book is really intriguing and fun to read. I'm really interested on what's about to happen next. This book is captivating and definitely deserves more attention. Nice work???
It's been a while since I read such a poorly written book.The editing is horrible. The same chapters are repeated again and again.The MC is unbelievable. It's not OP just not even remotely possible for a person to behave this way.The portrayal of the world lacks any depth whatsoever. Everything is too shallow and without thought.Very disappointed
This is a good novel!Just sometimes the mathematical or scientific problems are just too complicated to me or unrecognizable.The mc’s pride, the way he talked to others, his EQ, bruh moments...BUT this novel is very entertaining and too good!
Tl:DR "meh". Solid C-.Let me preface this review by stating the obvious: "THIS NOVEL DESPERATELY NEEDS AN EDITOR". now that that is out of the way I will continue.The bad: poor grammar, poor capitalisation / punctuation (often none, at all) and comically long run on sentences (I think I saw one paragraph long sentence with 6 "and"s in it back around chapter 10). The author is overly reliant on Autocowrong and it shows. How the novel flows would suggest that the author is not a native English speaker, and if that is the case then kudos for your effort friend, but you need an editor.There is a gaming term called Ludonarrative Dissonance, which describes the disconnect between a games narrative (the story) and the gameplay. In this work the author creates a similar dissonance by introducing a "genius scientist" which is overly reliant on his system and fails to have a single original thought. The overly ****** dialogue compounds this. It is hard to convince readers that your MC is a genius when he speaks in either short and choppy or long run on sentences.The meh: what could be fantastic fight chapters and power gains are glossed over instead of expanded on. The lack of detail transforms the elements which this genre typically does best into fluff; glossed over and quickly forgotten.The good: all the things which make this genre great are present; there is a solid foundation to build on.Closing thoughts: please, please... find an editor.
Geez what a ride!! I really enjoyed reading this and wish there was more. This latest world is completely terrifying too. I kept getting chills up my spine everytime she didn't get off the train. It's just so eerie with the lack of information and how nothing feels safe.