Oh my just two chapters in a I can already tell that this story is gonna be fun! I've experienced several emotions already and I love when an author can capture the scenes very essence in just a few words that pull you in and keep you captivated, that's what Glimmy has done with this story in just two chapters and I can't wait for the next update! If you haven't checked out any of her other books you really should (this story will be the 6th one in my library). Such an incredible and powerful writer!I will update this at the end of the month after more chapters have been released & Glimmy updates regularly ❤️.Much love to you Glimmy, thank you for sharing your gift with all of us and super excited to be riding with you from the beginning.
Cooler can’t be shameless because I am Cooler than all of you
I'm giving you a rating of 5 because I understand that you're a novice writer, but there really are a few small errors in logic that personally bother me a bit. At the outset of the novel, he refrains from distributing additional bread despite being a "benevolent individual by nature
I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well!I’m a passionate Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art.I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts. I also have been transform a script inspired by your story.Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality, and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart.Further. Feel free to contact meon discord: emily_jamess_ My Twitter ( @EmilyClair_)Hoping for a positive response. Thanks
I don't read a lot of books here, but this one reminds me of ones I do like. It has a darker tone to what I usually rear, but the interest it is creating in the schemes is something that I want to read more about.
I deeply respect author for being consistent, still on the road to the same goal, added to it but it's basically the same, the world building and it's elements didn't just change halfway through, anything that was added meshed with whatever was already there.Most of the stuff I started out liking and reading around the time i started this i basically already dropped.This one stood tall. It reminds me of the old stuff like i shall seal the heavens and the desolate era, and stuff from that time. Where writers actually gave a shit about their work, instead of just writing for the sake of writing. Back then it took getting halfway through a thousand chapter book to even start to see inconsistencies, and the chapters were long, min 2000 words, some going all the way to 10000 and beyond.These days the problems start from the first chapter, the gimmicks and themes are the main plot devices, systems, golden fingers are the actual story and most of the time they're not even well thought out.I miss having face slapping situations that actually made sense. But i digress it's good author, thank you and i know it's not done and it might get worse but for now i am thankful and so i thank you.currently following closely 1400+ as i post this
"Or ... The assistant will have fun with you Doc--"
"Okay Doctor."
I arrived at the front of the house and immediately knock the door.
"Huh? You know the place."
Never! Never!
"This assassin is not that far away from the hotel, so we can still catch as soon as possible!" He announced to his men.