It was good at the beginning but the translation is so bad I wish it can be more good to enjoy reading it so disappointed the novel is good but need more works on it
Yeah update please
Done reading this novel...it is a very good novel in the first half but a very rush ending
is ch.130 the last chapter ?
The use of lol like a nervous tick and the lack of elijahs eloquence makes it stupid if you are writing a character we all know and love u have to do it well and this is annoying sorry mate its just not for me
If the MC wasn't a toddler it would have been a 2/5. The story is bad, made even worse by the illogical age of the protagonist. Not a single aspect of this story makes sense in any capacity, nor is it fun to read about a prepubescent child doing what he is doing here. The author needs to be institutionalized.
Hi, your book is really good, but I noticed some errors, if you're in need of a proofreader, I can do it for free. I like how you sometimes make a serious situation seem funny, keep up the good work ✍???
the story is good, enjoyable, interesting. Your Grammar enough good. Good Work
Is this novel competing in WSA 2024? Please reply.
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Judging from the prologue this seems to be a interesting premise where her past is not as normal as it seen. The protagonist can be seen as not run of the mill type as she has a somewhat interesting and narcissistic mindset. There’s potential to be seen in the novel and hopefully the author will make it more intriguing
I haven't read all the store yet but how do you mess up a synopsis this much the main character is in fact male I get there she and he looked the same but all you have to do is read the name and the way the other characters interact with the person and you know it's male or female