Elvis28
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I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.
Though it sounds like it would be a good story I was confused once I saw that before he had transmigrated, he had been betrayed. Then in the synopsis tags and says " -lifetime companions" and "-no loner mc". This actually threw me off from wanting to read, how would you have an mc who's been betrayed by his closest friends and killed by them, reincarnate as a spoiled young master and have him go and still look for lifetime friends and not be a loner mc ? ironic.
review:1. wiriting quality is good enough to read.2. story is developing in a right direction.3. mc is confident, he has brain and he uses it.4. female lead is cute (really she is)5. zero to no misunderstandings.6. side characters have their own story and problems so we can understand their character but author focuses more on mc's story which is fair enough for me.7. To be honest world has yet to be developed and till now it is good developement has lot of potential.JUST GIVE IT A TRY YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.
Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not?So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it.I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid"That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters. Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time. Love ya all?
Started reading it a few days ago and I found it to be a real interesting read. So much thought process has been put in to create the world. The way MC has been portrayed makes you feel sorry for him at times but the way he rises to the occasion fill the heart with pride. Keep writing author.
story is good. every character is interesting and have depth in them. I love to see chemistry between Ren, Mary and Marylin. And i want Ren to beat sheet out of the other chosen ones specially Adam.
What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....What that picture doing here?Its a cultivation story....
I am the bone of my expGrinding is my body and spamming is my bloodI have written countless messagesUnknown to Trolls,Nor known to Mods. Have withstood countless aching joints but my fingers just can't stopYet, those hands will never hold anything So as I pray, Unlimited Exp Works.
I read to chapter 7.I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias. Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed.The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!! ?
I see much good quality here. Its nice to see this author still producing work. I see an intense and interesting story unfolding please continue even if others are unkind because I feel this one will really do well! so much going on here
It starts slow, but that's fine because it's hilarious and the author is grilling cliches like an op cultivator wipes out offencers. After reading 21 chapters, I'm hooked and checking WN to see if a new chapter is posted. ? Cultivator and level up cliches... I have high expectations. Don't let me down...
