Please when will you come back?
I'm loving this book. Good work, author!
Sweetheart I'm proud of you... I love this book
goodness!!!
What type of devil is this Shirley!!!! author I'm so angry.....I'm not happy rn.........
I hope Annie gets out of this, she's so innocent nevertheless, I like the way the book is flowing so it's a five star.
It's a great story - characters and story live are good
Very interesting book! The author's way of writing is amazing, I can see that she has a great potential to be a promising writer! maybe in dancing too? is she dancing? Btw, love the cover. ❤️ Had fun reading this. ❤️ Sending hugs and kisses (^o^)
I can't wait to keep reading what happens between Damian and Emily as the book progresses. I know I will be in for a good ride.
ples author update new chapter... ples ples
Good Book. Worth the read
love reading this book till the end.....
The concept is intriguing, but the protagonist's motivation is quite baffling. He allows his world to crumble and放弃了 progress by claiming "things need to be that way sometimes," which doesn't make logical sense since he possesses god-like powers over his people. He could easily intervene to stop it. Moreover, the excessive descriptions of his planet stretch for chapters, diluting the focus. The appeal of the story lies primarily in the connection between the MC and his world, which is lost when that aspect is overshadowed. The constant interruptions with intrusive ads – often covering half the screen and causing frequent pop-ups – significantly detract from the reading experience. I understand the need for financial support, but the ads are so disruptive that they almost render the content unbearable.
The plot was good, but the writing was too complex for me, and I disliked the protagonist from the start. I don't see any redeeming qualities in him.