The writer was quite amazing; I really love your story.?
Promising novel. The writing is great. The writer is consistent. The story seems to be going towards a dark fantasy route. I just hope the writer does not f**k it up.
I like this type of story. The MC's journey to become strong is still long, I like how the author doesn't make him strong too quickly. But I hope you can speed up the pace of the story a bit, and reduce some unnecessary dialogues, and be able to describe the MC's feelings. I'm sure you can be better.
Ok, finally, that's 20 chapters in, hurray! It's my book lol, so 5 stars is a given. First, to those my readers who were aggrieved about the heavy fantasy setting of Legendary Avatar, this is the redeeming book, pure football. Like the title says, it's a book about the rise of the MC from doomed aspirations to become a football God, the G.O.A.T. Just read the synopsis, and of course, constructive criticism is allowed.
Attention Fantasy Readers! This book is everything! Dark magical world? Check. Hot mysterious angel? Check. Evil villains that'll make you sleep with the lights on? CHECK. A few chapters in and y'all, RUN to go read this one! ??
Know the author from his previous book which he dropped but I really wish to see this books growt and hope he will not drop it also.Well by the way first review is by me. ?
I love seeing an actual medieval fantasy story without a stupid isekai plot and this one seems like it has some potential. However the author seems like a guy who would say sword art online is his first anime and call mushoku tensei a masterpiece. What a weirdo, I don't like him. Love the mc tho
I Love the story absolutely. Absolutely perfect. Just the updates are very slow. It's been a long time, and still waiting for the next chapter release. I don't know if you ended it or still continuing. But I hope you continue this if you can complete it, give it some simple quick ending. But please don't leave it in the middle.
yea very nice book, i like the growth of MC, i want more chapters :>
I really love your book , it is so captivating and interesting . After reading a chapter it keeps thinking of what to expect in the next chapter .I’ll recommend this book to anyone ❤️❤️
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