TwilightLord
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
This is really good, the story fits perfectly with my taste, where the main character has a charm that makes others feel both awe and fear. If you have similar taste, I recommend reading this, and I hope the harem will include 3-4 girls.?
Ummm........ author I think you deleted privious chapters
???Well im support myself , well any way i want to look at people opinions but its seem its hard to make people read it but any way im develop myself by time i guess as later chapters the quality becomes better, i hope you enjoy it and you can comment i will answer every single one , feel free this my first novel,
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love the book it's well written good development and background
Read that in o ne sitting, interesting work . Keep it up , although there are few missing info clips, and a little detailing about things would be good
This is exactly what you’d expect for a good SCP fic. I’m not huge on critiquing a solid novel so I won’t do any of that. There’s good grammar and an engaging storyline. Give it a try I highly recommend especially if you like the faction building genre. Good job author!
its pretty good so far im pretty inpressed?
The pacing is perfect, balancing moments of quiet reflection with bursts of action. I am loving read this novel!
The story is good til now but we're still real early on so it could change for the worse or become even better, The characters are really good especially the MC, The Smut scenes are Okey "could be better"but overall til now it's been a very good read, i would definitely give it a try.
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