The only reason I got through 40 chapters of this is because I have low standards when it comes to beast taming stories, so I’ll read almost anything. I would say it’s an average story at best. It’s very predictable if you’ve read other system stories or beast taming stories. If anything, I felt like the number targets for the system were pretty unrealistic.The translation is bad. Aside from grammar and spelling errors here and there, the translation is just sloppy. Although, there do seem to be less mistakes in the latter half of the 40 chapters.
Your writing style is unique and I love to see more about this novel. I think the start is good and it has a quick pace. Updates are stable. The world background is okay, but a little more detail will earn this its 6th star as well as in character design.I hope to see this author's success!
This novel is pretty good. It seems like I am reading a game story. And the qiao tai is the main game character.Although I read only few chapters... It is pretty good feels like it is real...
A good bookGood storiesAnd I enjoy it very muchPeople should read itCuz this goodAnd suchAnd I really like short stories with a good action thingy than romance
I read ahead on the raws, and I have some unhappy news for everyone: the author is a foot fetishist. I'll die a happy man if I never have to read about someone's "fragrant jade feet" ever again.
Absolutely love this new novel,I love the attitude of the main character,I love the story overall so I hope that they continue to write this story and bring more chapters of soon,can't wait
Another level system novel, this one has poor writing style. MC has a system that relies on negative emotions for upgrade (kind of similar to "God Level Demon"), but the story development falls far short of expectations. MC has average intelligence (not very clever, but not too stupid either). It does not help that there are too many extraneous descriptions that do nothing to advance the plot (feels like the author is adding on conversations/ descriptions just to meet the word count requirements). Not highly recommended (try God Level Demon if you are looking for similar game systems- a far better read).
So first off, the writing quality is fine, there is not too much problem with that, the updating quality is very good, tough the size of each chapter is small, so I think you should publish 1 chapter out of two or three small ones. The story development, as for now nothing has had really happened, the protagonist just stayed in his village training and writing, so I expect a quick development of it's quality, what you must do is not make it really fast forward nor too slow, just find the right amount, try get our interest with something like a tension.About the characters names now, don't just put a bit of every anime and make it a story, for example I don't think you should have named the protagonist Roronoa Zoro, it's just sound like someone who is obsessed with that character, same for Artoria, besides what are the chances of a Japanese to be named (with both the family name and the first name) like someone from Europe or Mexico.Then about the paragraph's space, don't make a huge thing, it's very easy to get lost.Finally about the world background, very poor for now so you should really work it from now on.
OK i give up waiting for next chapter and i am wasting my spirit stone ffor you...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Random as F. Dropped. Author doesn't know what's a protagonist is. Mc became a Tragic magnet. Anti-hero failed execution at its best. His system doesn't do sht, it's more like a game element nothing more.Arifureta inspired, tried to copy concept failed at the start mid and end. Man this novel sucks I'm speechless on the absurdity and stupidity of the author
So far so good, the grammar is pretty good. Itachi's personality in this novel is believable. I look forward to future chapters. This is worth a read for those who like both itachi and atg!
This novel is the Most and interesting I ever read upon and I even spend $90 jus to unlock chapters cause is fOOKING worth it!!! Long Live Immortal Tong!!!!! Hope the next chapter came out asap!!