Well, I think it's okay, only read when free, and don't have anything to read again
I would have given 10/10 just for someone writing something new and not following the cliche to support their uniqueness and encourage them for that.But damn this story is soo good ? Despite starting reading the story after reading some *questionable* reviews, I still read it and will continue reading it. Keep up the good work ?
it should be a good story with wonderful potential Mc brings down the quality by a lot and made me feel like it needed veteran webnovel reader patience to read 50 chapters it felt like author tried to flesh put characters but ended up with more issues...like isekaied mc needed a sword to tell him how a system workedfuturistic fantasy world with magic and technology but no DNA test or blood rituals for paternity...characters too are flawed like first thought on seeing an albino kid is adultery.. on a noble family matriarch who then proceeds to weep like a maid and abuse the kid for 9 yrsthere are other things like authors attempt at mother pov to make it more reasonable..but the attempts to whitewash his mother and sister is even more forced..an s class lvl sister who silently watched the abuse for some unfathomable reason even if u can tolerate all these then mc helps by being so annoying for a supposedly 23 yr old dude with mental age of 16 by acting 7 dude has good powers which is basically equivalent exchange (sacrifice) can get op if he had more than 2 brain cells and stoppp3d whiningread at your preference coz honestly good story with development potential..but author seems to want to focus on family drama part
Hello, I am the almighty author.Although this is my second novel, I must say that I have worked hard on the plot to ensure it is well thought out. I waited for the right moment to publish it, and even though it was challenging at first to structure each chapter and keep the story engaging, I am happy with the result.Now then, you’re probably wondering how many chapters it will have. To be honest, I’m not completely sure, but I plan for it to have a minimum of 500 and a maximum of 800 chapters. The story will be divided into 8 to 10 volumes, each containing 2 or 3 narrative arcs.Oh, and by the way, from the prologue to chapter 19, it will serve as the "Introduction or Context" so that you don’t think it’s filler, a waste of time, or something unnecessary to write.I know my writing still has a lot of room for improvement, but I’ve been working on it. Starting from chapter 35, I put more effort into refining my style, and I also rewrote the first chapters because I wasn’t fully satisfied with them.Now, regarding whether there will be a harem... The answer is a resounding "NO." This is a novel primarily focused on action and the protagonist’s development as he prepares to defeat the Nine Monarchs. However, don’t worry; there will be some romance later on. Although it will play a secondary role, the protagonist will have a partner further into the story, but not in the early arcs.If you have any questions after reading the first arc, I’ll be happy to answer them. But if you haven’t read it yet, I recommend doing so before asking anything. It’s better for you to discover the details of the story for yourself. (Hehe, yes, I’m quite a playful author).Lastly, I want to thank you for giving my novel a chance. In my opinion, and that of some friends, the story is decent. My writing might not be perfect at the beginning, but I hope you’ll continue reading and leave a review once you’ve decided whether you liked it or not.Thank you for reading this!
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This novel is tagged harem right?. Right?
I love the pacing of the story so far. I'm normally not into system stories but I love this one especially the MC. I did notice there are a lot of big words though and I might have had to consult the dictionary a few times? But heh, I did learn some new words. Also the chapters are very lengthy which I like. Overall, it's a good story and I can't wait to read more. Good job!
Shameless or not here I come! Author here, giving my book a five star review with all humbleness. To my readers, I wish you a thrilling experience with <
I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level
Hazel would join the army as Hazen, and the army commander Damon would begin doubting his sexual orientation because his having feelings he shouldn't have for his gender- Hazen
Can you just write more chapters stupid you are driving all of us crazy??????? write more chapters just write ✍️✍️✍️✍️ not hard at all.
Thanks if you keep updating i will be greatful because i nowhere find after cp 54?. thx..................................................................