Ji Li Zhao traced Han Tengfei's gaze and can't help but chuckle at his tranced face. [ Oh, Uncle! ]
"that depends, Mr parker, if you are a threat which i hope you are not, and from the way you have been acting you don't seem to be"
Volya then explains it to Romain about the payment that he needs to pay after six months. He then tells,
In a low voice, he added something that sounded off from his previous words. "... I wish I had that kind of choice."
"Hey don't be like that, each person have their own happiness despite what happened to your parents. Don't live in the past because you'll regret it just be happy in your own phase and don't worry too much okay?" His words calms me I'm really glad he is my best friend.
Hi. As a an author trying to establish his/her foothold in this vast ocean, you really did a good job. So far the OP ness of the MC is just right up my alley. It is not too much but rather, just the right amount of spice. I hope that you van incorporate some famous phrases or lines from anime characters to add a bit of comical humor. Like adding condiments to your food. Also, I hope the range of skills and powers is not limited to those used for fighting. Like with other MCs being well versed with 2 or 3 other things (the usual alchemy, forging, formation, etc.) All in all. Its a good story to read. I gave 4 on Story Development for now since I cannot grasp yet where the story is leading too (unless you meant the MC to just be OP on the storyline w/ no setbacks). We look forwars to more chapters. It's a damn good read.
"He's too strong!!"
The scandal of the Estrella Corporation was so sensational, it had been covered and broadcasted to all the planets in various sectors. The worst thing was, the Estrella Corporation had denied their involvement in the incident, pushing all the blame to the now estranged young representative Wales. Afterwards, they then tried to wash their hands by sending a large sum of compensation to the two representatives. Nonetheless, they had still been indicted by the Empire, while their political power and trading rights were reduced to nearly 50%.
The story is written with the ambition of building a big story, the other characters are poorly constructed and you can easily forget who they are for a short while, even so, this world is built great to attract reader.
You go girl , make my reverse harem fantasy come true ??✨
I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*.Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before.Points to ignore while reading:Mc personalitySidecharacters personalityPower level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak.If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines.These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.
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