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For a Beast Taming novel this one is really good. Finally some serious stuff in this genre, not just some stupid pets, shops and dimensions leading to nowhere.............................................
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I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.
My friend, I am here to tell You a story the story of "The Eros God System – Saving the World and Defeating the Demonesses by Busting My Nut, One At a Time.".Once upon a time a good book with intresting caractere,good writing and a good story sadly it didn't last. the hordes of advertisement and fake chapter started, after that the legendary shorter chapter and story degradation began on the 34 chapters 22 had story the rest was advertisement and we as the readers had to withstand that, our tears of sorrow became blood and this blood filld our sallow grave. This was the story of a good book, killed by The Crow of Guilt.But My Friend it's not the end of the story because The Crow of Guilt returnd and upon realising his failure he decided to erase his book sadly now nobody can read The Original, Full of Fake chapters and Fake updates."So what did the Crow do this time?" You say. Hahaha he made a new book, ho.... i mean a "new old" book, Maybe you did not see it because it's no longer available only people who were there at the time of the old war know about it.You see the "new old" is exactly the same book every letter is the same and The Crow only realised 9 chapters(and an extra with only that in it "阿斯顿啊u") and again our hearts were full of sorrow, but in the deepest part there was something else a powerful feeling that tear one's heart apart this feeling was hatred. we the people who supported The Crow and loved him started to feel loathing and hatred toward The bird who bring sorrow. And so this "new old" book only received one review by Gabriella and it was full of anger.now let's talk about what we have before our eyes the "new" book you who has not been part of the war maybe indifferent but you shall not be fool by The Crow of Guilt, He the one how bring sorrow will break your heart and mind i've warned you be careful. the "new" book is the same story but the MC Alex has a new name and he did not "slip down of an escalator" the rest of the story 95% is the same.A year we had a year of peace and the Crow dug out the war axe we who fought in the war are tired we no longer can fight we...we. we are weak.And here we are look a "new" chapter who look a lot like the "old" almost like the crow just change some word here and there to hide the truth.and after only 21 chapters you need to pay to read that mean the chapter 22" 34 Threesome (1)" is an "old" chapter so now you need to pay to read a chapter you've already read a year ago. I...i no longer have the force................... i think it is the end of the story.....excuse me i would like to be alone till my last moment.my friends i'm sorry if i am late,now is time i join youGoodbye World.
I haved redead the raws and the MC is intelligent, humble and kind. There aren't young masters up until chapter 53. That chapter is where i am currently.
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I hope you don't make the same mistake of the tryanny of steel and introduce the guns to fast and focus on cold weapons and infrastructure also it would be nice to see more kingdom building instead of war and also hope you introduce heram as its fairly common for powerful men to have them and it died after Christianity took over and to all the people who complain about the girls falling for the mc easily in tryanny of steel are stupid first he is the mc second he is handsome third he is rich and powerful and in old days where daughters wear wed to just gain some profit and have to say in whatsoever its not hard to imagine why they fell for him being liberal and all the above reason so they are just stupid I hope you add heram in this also hope this novel also has the mc writing books on philosophy and what not as he lived in the future and describe how thing might be in future English is not my native tongue sorry
G'day mates! A new novel by Choas, so you know it will be good! Writing Quality: There have been very few errors in the currently released chapters. 4.9/5Stability of Updates: Tbd.Story Development: Seems interesting so far, and Choas's past stories have had interesting plots, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this one develops.Character Design: Just in the first few chapters, several interesting people have been introduced. Fey best girl?World Background: It seems to be a science/magic mixed world with monsters roaming the wilds, I hope to read more of Dax's adventures!
I was enticed with the title of him having max stats but what I read was so disappointing. I assumed that having max stats should have made him like a sort of calamity class type danger or something but this? He beats up gangsters and Awakeners that with having a max stat should have taken him just an instant to finish but no, its like the max stats doesnt mean anything at all. Having max stat would have meant that in one step you could cause earthquakes and stuff but this? Very disappointing. Not to mention the MC wasting his time on Gangster squabbles. A real veteran from so many wars would not have wasted his time doing this.
cemoi thinks this is an okay novel cemoi ratings: story Development: 4 goodwriting quality: 4 average character design: 3 average updating stability: 4 goodworld background: 3 average total rating: 3.6 pretty okay novel not bad,not good just average.