Realistic stories always touch your heart as you can relate the things depicted in the story to your life. The way emotions are being written distinctly shows how much emotions are embedded in each part of the story. I personally believe that a good story is all about emotions, feelings, and the difficulties a person undergoes during his journey to be successful. This is the story that gives you all! So, without any thought just add this story to your libraries. Through the description in the story, one can analyze what kind of character Rudra is!! The story is slow-paced in the first few chapters and that seems okay as the character is still building up. Keep up with your good work, dear author, and best wishes for the contest.
This usually isn't a type of book I would personally pick out, but I was pleasantly surprised by how organized and efficient the author presented it. It's very in-depth in a professional understanding as well as giving ”highschoolers” a better look as they were exhibited as mature, secure giving, devoted individuals that sought out a dream to become an idol and I honestly believeufffc even with the struggles and the determination of others wanting their downfall, they will succeed! I also wanted to make a point, the ”Manger, ” may have had his struggles, to this day, but with the determination, he broadcasts in gaining the audience to promote the ”Cherry Blossoms, ” I honestly feel that he may like it more then he realizes. Maybe it's not just about the money he will earn by managing this idol club?!One suggestion I would consider is to check out ”Grammarly, ” it is a fantastic program that helps with punctuation and grammatical errors. Within your story, I have noticed a couple of errors, as well as the changing of characters ”Pov.” It can get a little confusing regarding who is talking at the moment; I suggest titling the top of each change though it is nothing major, I believe it will help the flow and overall understanding of your story.
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A great novel, this book is amazing . Love the creativity of this book. The author really did a great job in writing this down. Love the grammar, the pace and so is the character design in this book. Great job!!!!
What a fantastic story! There's not a lot of chapters in this novel yet but so far so good! I can't wait to read more chapters in the future.
I suck at review lol but really good book and webnovel hates me because they want it to be more than 140 letter long but webnovel can go and su-
Why do they pick the shitty ones??? There are really good novels. I really dont get it. Why you do this? FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
It's such a good read. I would definitely read again in the future.
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It's actually insane this madreader guy only has 37 chapter a out right now but he has almost 300 reviews with a 4.9 average rating, which means his novel must be one of the highest top rated novels. And yet it's a hidden gem? Why is he not milking this and releasing more? Why is he not featured or trending?
It’s very good so far and its worth the read.
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