Beautiful story enjoyed it till the end
nice story, i hope caleb wont cheat, but it seems he is a cheater
amazing book! cant wait for the next one! thank you, you are a great author!
Hello I hope you will notice me. I admire you for being good at writing stories even though I'm not finish it every time I remember this story I imagine myself to this like I'm the one who in the story you make.Please do more or create more stories, I'm sure everyone will love and like it. Lovelots!
More update please ?
Very good book can’t wait for more updates hope it is soon
Take a break ??
Comment section is more interesting than the novel itself Lamo
Lol my comment talking about how I dropped the novel and picked it up got removed.
Here is a quic breakdown for readers wanting to take this novel on. There are some good parts and bad parts, sometimes you might need to push through chapters. It is a good read though and I would recommend it. Not the top like LOTM or those novels, but a good read to waist time.
Just wanna put this here in case anyone doesn't know what that yaoi tag meant. This is a story of a male protagonist and his partner (spouse) is also a male. Yaoi = male x male relationship
I just finished that novel and i wanted to start this one and find the end of the novel as much as hilarious as his beginning and development phase I too recommend that novel for those who like a novel with some comedy bit not exaggerated one
I don't get the rating for this novel. I was originally quite interested but now I decided to drop it after 270 chapters. The reasons ?
-too much non sense, paragraph after paragraph of useless grabish, and not related to the story, not even interesting to read either.
-the character almost never stand up for himself and let everyone make decision for him.
-the system is barely mentioned, after the beginning, almost 230 chapters without the system getting anything.
Well basically it's not even fun to read anymore, 5% of the chapter is related to the story, so basically you read 1 paragraph for 1 chapter, the MC is annoying, the story is annoying, the only good thing is his GF but even then their relation is too slow paced.
That is sad that the author is so bad at writing a story cause the overall story isn't bad, but the way it is developed and written make it impossible to keep going.