This is the first time I'm reading a sci-fi novel and I love it, it reminds me of a sci-fi movie I watched and I love the way you put your grammars
Super exciting !!!!cant't wait for more of her books
this is some good stuff author i am liking it so far
First time making a review so I’ll just say this. The story is good. The updates are are about two chapters a day which is good, length of chapters are also good. Writing quality is also good, besides a ghosts name which keeps changing from what I saw. The only bad thing in my opinion is that there is two protagonists, and in my opinion the proper protagonists has nothing special about him being having a good D, and maybe rich I forgot. Xia wenxue, the 25% protagonist, can be said to be a normal protagonist with nothing special about him on the outside, but actually has supernatural strength and talent, like having a super computer like mind (don’t know what else as well yet). Some of the heroines have supernatural like senses and strength as well, and they also seem to have ghost companions as well but are in a coma right now.Ye shengge, the 75% protagonist, however seems to have nothing special about him besides having a bigger D. He has no supernatural strength or senses, and no powerful people who will help him if xia wenxue or the heroines want to kill him. He may be a little smart but nothing like a super computer. And while the some of the heroines have fallen, and have s*x with him, they don’t actually care about him or loyal to him, even though he calls them slaves. He also lets them still have s*x with xia wenxue, which I understand is so xia wenxue doesn’t suspect anything and kills ye shengge, its kind of annoying that he has to hide scared that xia wenxue will kill him when ye shengge is ment to be the proper protagonist.I hope that this in the future changes and the heroines stop having s*x xia wenxue and ye shengge actually gets stronger to protect himself. Besides this, the novel is good.Also there could be a bit more information about the world and the powers of people and ghosts, as it will allow us to understand stand xia wenxue and the heroines strength, and it will also allow ye Shengge to get some strength, if he gets any at all in the story.
leaving this, I do not like the systems or gods that tell you what to do or punish you, basically a slave ..............................................................
Never! Never!
"Boo," Cap said causing the surprised Shiva to start attacking at full force casually throwing high kicks, punches, chops, leg sweeps everything only to get countered or dodged.
"Pengkhianat Karel."
Oo*** sorry for that mano ??
"she only eighteen" her parents cried. "I don't want my parents to die.. " she said making all of them look at her, the mysterious man smiled and put his gun in his waistband of his slacks.
He slowly picked the black striped girl who was back asleep in her mother's arm and slowly placed her back down with the others which had the effect of Sasha cuddling up to them. Slowly as not to wake the other cubs he slowly picked up the second born who is a male.
I woke up looking at intense gray eyes. I closed my eyes again, groaning. That's when I remebered. I sat up quickly, unintentionally brushing my lips against Stark's. I heard him gasp softly and glared at him. "How did you get in my room?" I asked calmly but sternly, standing up." He pulled out a paper clip. I nodded and opened the door. "Well, I'm fine. You can leave." I stated, gesturing toward the door. He sighed and stood up, walking out the door. "When will you forgive me?" He asked as he stopped. "When I die." I replied coldly, shutting the door. I took a deep breath. I heard clattering and opened the door. I ran downstairs, finding Stark and a black hole. I ran to him, sliding to his hand. We slipped and fell into the black hole. We arrived in Storybrooke...