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I could bear with the author's grammar since english isn't his main language but there are too many mistakes in other points. Romance was very forced to the point that he was already calling the princess of the Yan Empire his future wife after they had just met in a single chapter. He doesn't act like someone who was trapped and ignored by his father for 8 years.I would continue to read the novel since I like ones with systems but there is no doubt that this novel doesn't can't even stabilize itself.
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So far this is really great! I havent read the other books on this trial read, but I definitely don’t think that they can be better than this.
THIS BOOK SUCKS!!!!! IT WOULD BE A BETTER IF THE PETS WHERE BETTER BUT THEY SUCK THIS BOOK NEED TO GET TAKEN DOWN!!!!!
I won’t talk about translation and update stability. But this is an another cliche story it’s just repetitive of other stories and totally cliche I dropped it at 40th chapter I can’t bear to read it through. As for other things you can decide it for yourself but it’s not that much impressive if you ask me. Just some nonsense about friends betrayal, chasing lover, missing father (don’t know about mother), talented maid, goes to alchemist association and gives tips to some old fella then he becomes his handyman, and I’m pretty sure it’s gonna be harem.
I actually love this!! The way the character changes as time goes on with the system and when he realizes how much he changed also the ending!!! Im happy he survived lol
Be aware this is one of those shameless reviews out there. Because the first person who should love the story should be the author, who then shares his/her loved work to the other, bringing them the enjoyment to read.
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This is a nice novel ,I have already read all 60 chapters in it , sigh but only if mc would have used his genius brain on thinking seriously about his relationship with yang xiaoman and have a little romance with her for maybe for some chapters then it would have been nice.
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Somehow, the MC reminds me of Steamed Bun Invasion. Whom at the both ends of extreme, a PRO yet a NOOB. A pro in mechanics (character control) and a noob in game technicalities (logistics, utilization of in-game items and other stuff)