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Suddenly, Akira coughed to gather their attention as he said, "So I take it we'll be going back again? I kinda want to get used to that power."
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He closed his eyes to gather energy so he could lay open his life in front of her.
Noooooooo
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"Senior Brother," Fang Zhou pointed towards Jin Yahui's feet. "You probably need shoes before you can leave."
It was then that an old man found it and took it to his house. He put it in a small wooden cage and fed it.
good novel, lots of potential, 8 chapters at this moment but i already enjoy reading it a lot. mc its to my liking so far hope he keeps walking this path away from the authors who like monk mc and green prairies in their head. keep the flame alive and feast in your desires.
I like the character development and the world building in this story. It’s one of the top I have read here. Would recommend for those that like fantasy type stories.
?AUTHORS REVIEW!!This is my first Novel after having sat on the idea of it for a while and the story progresses as a more slow burn into the life of the MC in his journey to the top. I write a lot in the MC's perspective as it is from his view of the world . However different PoV's will be there⚠️THE NOVEL ISN'T ALL HAPPY GO LUCKY, SO THERE ARE AND WILL BE SOME BLOODY OR GENERALLY CRUEL SCENES THE GENERAL IDEA IS TO HAVE EACH CHAPTER GO INTO DETAIL OF EITHER THE SURROUNDINGS OF THE MC OR THE CHARACTER OF THE PEOPLE , HENCE THE SLOW BURN.All in all I'm here for the fun and joy of having to write this book and having people enjoy it. If at all there is something a reader needs to make me aware of about the story comments and reviews are always there.Thank you for reading.
This novel deserves 5 stars in nearly every aspect. The only 4 star was for the update rate, but you already explained the difficult circumstances you found yourself in and I understand that and wish you all the best for the healing process! :)I‘ve read countless web novels over the past years and I have to say that in comparison to them and the ones I read lately, this novel (and My Elf System) stands out exceptionally in so many ways. The world building, characters and their development, the action and lewd scenes and simply everything about it are so well thought out and written, that it captures the reader and leaves me wanting for more! Great work, dear author and please keep it up! I wish you all the best and am looking forward to future chapters.
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