i hope we are getting to the end of the book.
is crown boys same as crown bad boys gone wild?
Hay author can u please tell us how many chapters are left ?
This book was an emotional rollercoaster and I enjoyed it a lot. I really appreciate the longer chapters as well. Great job!
I loved this story. Lol I think rolls was my favorite. I couldn’t put down the book. I might re-read it down the road. Steamy yet funny! Great job
good, i like this story
A great book written by an amazing author. Descriptions and story line are great. ...
Its interesting story, keep it up
shit book that repeats chapters over and over to just end mid book of all 3 novels it copied from
I loved this book and cannot wait for more. I have thought about doing this myself, however I don't think my brain could keep up. Good things will be coming your way, but you need someone to proof your writings. Love and happiness on your journey! I might be able to help with proofreading.
Take heed that this is a cultivation novel. Cultivation novels often involve grinding and frequent time lapses. This is standard for the genre, so if you're not a fan of this style, you might want to steer clear of novels tagged as cultivation. That said, the concept and setup here are quite unique. It’s particularly interesting how the main character (MC) spends time inside the original's body while the original is still alive, spanning an entire arc! I’ve only seen this done in one or a couple of other stories. The MC acts like a second personality, trying to survive while hiding his existence from the original.
I appreciate that the MC also has villainous moments, which makes sense given that he receives the original's memories and body. In my opinion, this is one of the most realistic aspects of a transmigration story where the MC ends up in a villain’s body. Starting at a high position (like a Maou or Demon King), he tries to prevent the original’s tragic fate to save himself and fulfill his system mission, but it’s a close call. He eventually encounters the novel’s protagonist, who is still very young at the moment. The male lead (ML) is a younger seme.
Regarding the mpreg aspect, it involves a snake egg. Divine beast cultivators have developed a pill that allows males to become pregnant, and the MC was forcibly given this pill. He had to navigate this situation blindly, as it goes beyond what is typically written about in such stories. It’s endearing that the egg can mentally communicate with both parents while still inside. The MC, meanwhile, struggles with a sense of unreality and has a hard time accepting his pregnancy, which is completely understandable.
I enjoy the world-building and the complexities involving time and world dimensions. The battles are fantastic, and the MC’s tribulation is especially thrilling and intense, with enemies lurking everywhere. Even though they are powerful, they face significant challenges and setbacks. They aren’t overpowered (OP) but instead combine their innate strengths with hard work and determination. Their resilience and tenacity are what ultimately lead to their victories.
Regrettably, I am forced to give this novel a mere 2-star rating, as it falls far below expectations. It astonishes me how it has garnered 4 stars, considering the author seems to lack even the basic effort to make the narrative engaging. The writing lacks depth and creativity, offering no compelling introductions for characters or the setting, leaving readers uninterested in investing emotionally.
From the very first chapters, it becomes evident that the main character – and even his reincarnation – remain poorly developed. There's no clear background on his parents or the world he was reincarnated into. The story abruptly shifts between discussing the poor quality of fictional novels and the sudden success of the protagonist's own masterpiece. The author appears to neglect crafting a coherent journey for the reader to connect with, despite the premise being "An Author in Another World."
In conclusion, the time and effort put into writing this work are severely lacking, and I would advise readers to spare themselves the disappointment.