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I'm just here for the free fp given for review
Goodness that was an opening, love how the skill works and isn't just blatantly overpowered. I feel like the author is going pull of something crazy with this story if done right.
Great story and great sincerity from the author for having the chapters not being edited the best. Overall a great read 8.5/10
in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.
the male lead is so likable and hard working. i am really interested in the plot development . this story has a lot of potential. the author has done an awesome job of keeping it clear and lively so far. waiting for more chapters.
I need more of this.....................
I open the door and my bed is seeing. I jump to the bad and take relax nap.
The church was already half-ruined by the time the reinforcements had arrived. A group of barbarian bikers, fifteen men and women in arms, halted around a hundred meters away from the site. Foremost among the group were Gael and her personal guards, as always. Aelthred was positioned in the center, assessing the whole situation and issuing out commands there. Gunfire was still heard occasionally; a sign of possible survivors out there. They were not too late, at the least, but they had to move quickly.
"Good ... morning ... Mrs ... "
I heared screaming of all my friends from they door by door that we passed, it's not just a scream, it's a song, a suffer song, a song of freedom desire, the unwanted chained, a song that only us can understand.
"Yes, who the heaven smart people who want to choose their leaders based on the words they just hear from other people and quickly they say it's the truth."