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I expected his sister to be more reliable and proactive rather than a background character. But apart from the start of the story and the constant reminder from the text that ”his sister is smart”, she always seems like a rabid dog that her brother needs to reign in from time to time.Tl;dr. Not really bad but not really good. Don’t expect it to be amazing.
Decent enough story up to chapter 60, at which point this was dropped. Chapters 61+ have been mass uploaded recently as trash-quality MTL. This story deserves better than MTL garbage.
Bro please continue this novel this is too good to be abandoned
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It's like the author took out all the joy and fun in a reincarnated system novel, leaving only the level up stuff. There's a bit of humor here, but the joke goes on too long without developing any meat to the story to keep things moving.
Tbh this is the over all best book I have read, although it is troublesome to read on my phone and not an actual book I decide to still read, simply because I absolutely love this
This is review for only 60 chapters during Trial Period of this novel.A very good novels for those who like Magic Elements. Don't get fooled by the "Video Game" genre of this novel. There is no system, STAT page, World Announcement or Ranking Leaderboard. The Game Interface is divided into Announcement(Level Up, Exp Gain, Quest, Update Notice, etc), Spell Models(spells that MC knows).It also contains a bit of Dark theme storyline as MC get to know that a Noble Family in the game world ate Human Heart(Orphan Children's) as they believed it will help then gain more lifespan.If you forget about the Real World, Game Cabins and Player Resurrection Skill then this novel is just like any other(good) cultivation novel(Magic except of Qi). MC is a OP mage because of his unique Talent "Magic Power Control". Any character in the game can choose 2 talents freely but MC already has this innate talent chosen for him so he was only able to choose 1 talent freely.Very little is known about the worlds both Game and Real. In these 60 chapters, Real World Storyline mostly revolves around MC updating his forum page, MC and his friends talking about the game in MC's friend's bar, MC in his office handing his Resignation Letter to the Manager. As for the Game World Storyline, it revolves around the town where MC spawned, the city he goes to, name of the country they are in and The Holy Realm where you have to go to make a guild.And lastly if you like this novel after reading and want to read MTL then you can search its chinese name on google. Its chinese name is:- 法爷永远是你大爷最新章节
Great!intriguing!thoroughly enjoyable! Also I have a question, is the game world a projection of the world kaiden's clan hails from ? And will the game continue even when kaiden leaves earth?
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at first I thought that maybe the chapters would be super short since it looks like the author released all of the chapters at once, but the chapter lengths are all what would be considered average compared to other novels.
This novel has a serious case of word-count-itis. The author wastes so incredibly much time on useless nonsense just to make the story longer. It felt like it would be a faster story at first, with the various time skips, but nearly every "event" within the story is just a waste of space. Not to mention that the in-world logic is just nonsensical, and the author pretty much just does whatever he wants with no regard for making the plot seem natural or realistic. Very surprised so many people 5 starred this and is recommending it as one of the best current xianxia novels. To me, it's very low quality writing.
