Very fun to read. It's been the best novel on this site for me ???????????????????????????????????????
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Action and adventure has always been my concern. Ima give 5 stars to author because of this. I hope this book stands out among others. The plot is kinda intriguing. Wanna discover more..
you are my favourite author. keep up the good work.
The story has potential. But unfortunately the grammer makes it almost unreadable to an extent. If you get an editor for this, it would be a good novel.
one of the best vr novel I have read ...author please update soon
looks interesting........................more chaps maybe?.......................................................mmmm...........................
not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story
Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.
The novel is great even though the author has a dark fetish please update more!!!
I so far really like this story and I hope it can continue, especially with the time travel gamer trope that can just go in any direction along with how the author sees fit. One of my only qualms with it is that some things aren't really explained all that well, like why are all the beasts he got "goddesses" and what is the rule on using the encyclopedia that he can only summon one of them, even with the ruls changing it didn't seem to say why he could only summon one, but then again I could have just missed it. But over all I really like the story and I hope the author can continue to write it
Seized by the System is a story about Fang Ning who has been possessed by a system after commenting on a website about a meteor. This novel has a interesting idea, but thats about it. While the idea is interesting, I don't see how you can make it work in a novel. Everything feels rather pointless.First off, the translation quality is decent. There isn't any obvious mistakes either, and compared to most translation novels this is already pretty good. Writing quality in general is average thought. (4/5 stars)Story development. This a comedy novel, meaning the story is rather lackluster. The only point of focus in this novel is the comedy, everything else is completely disregarded. The pacing is rather awful, there are random time skips really early on. The system fights for justice "just because". The power scaling is rather bad as well, I mean, they literally don't tell you anything. This is a "cultivation" novel, and we don't even know the main character's strength. Aside from that, the story is completely lackluster. It's extremely dull. (1/5 stars)The character design is disregarded as well. We have the main character, a procrastinator. This doesn't change. We also have a stupid system, this doesn't change. There are also plenty of women who are thirsting for the main character, but this doesn't matter as theres no romance. All other side characters are rather stupid as well, and this seems to be a running theme in Chinese comedy. (1/5 stars)World background is somewhat interesting. It's rather vague, but that might because I haven't read terribly far into the story. It's a world where various people have awakened super powers, and this ranges widely from super speed to cultivation masters. (3/5 stars)Overall, the story's premise was rather limited from the start, and as usual with most Chinese comedies, story development and character design are forgotten. I give this novel 2.8 stars out of 5.