Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.
The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author .I enjoy your work .
recommended:)
All in all. Great idea, terrible execution, and web novel really needs to start quality checking. They're way too many poorly cut diamonds. Because of this there's so many stories that would have been good but turned out terrible, because of either a bad writing habit or repetitive simple mistakes(ect). I especially think they should encourage polishing up old chapters, especially when the writers need a change of pace. besides revisiting old chapters will always a good thing.
It's actually quite good, I'm enjoying the read, I just have a little problem, the description of the characters, especially the women or members of the harem, we don't know if they are tall, short, if they have big, modest or small breasts, yes they have curves, a huge butt, toned, heart shaped, eye color, absolutely none of that has been mentioned, we don't even know if Allaire has wolf ears or tail or anything like that.I'm in chapter 15 btw, I hope and is changed that later, otherwise it would be a problem, if you can't describe them, then at least put a reference image in some auxiliary chapter
Great story, and is good to read. The characters in the story are funny and super cool. There are amazing fights and other things increasing the stories plot to more amazing.
Theres no story, just power fantasy tuned down, but in the end its still power fantasy, its ungodly boring, the same thing we've all seen, with no interesting concepts, terrible translation, and the only good point is the grammar but im pretty sure Google is still updating Google Translate these days, so its no different from the MTL version.
stability of updates is my only concern and as of right now i don't know if its dropped or not. Author san pls tell us if its dropped
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The synopsis is wrong, he doesnt wake up to find an instant dungeon he makes it appear ....Just the fact that the synopsis cant be bothered to.be accurate makes me dislike it. Thats and the annoying mc, who constantly calls every equaitment he gets trash. He wont wear a crown cause its ugly, who tf is gonna see him in that crown?! Ocd my as.s, wants a 100 completion rate but it doesnt apply to getting all the loot and hording it?! Idk man idk.
I am speechless! I have much to say, but I summarize it to say, this author deserves an award... I have read the synopsis of one of her book and I got hooked and couldn't Free myself. Here, I am again, with this author a kind of painting my real life.. Chai! There is God.. Author, stop stealing and making my heartbeat stand still.I love every fabrics of this authors writing, the structural development, the quality of writing, the background, story development and whatever you could think is excellently excellent.This author is an affection robber, who wants to steal my interest, but I am available to be stolen, I will read your books, recommend it to friends and specially read it out to my wife chapter to chapter, because we've had experiences and we are glad that our love is better, because we are wider and stronger despite all...I recommend this amazing master piece. This author deserve nothing less than 5 stars.Kudos to the author..this was a Christmas gift to me and my family.Previewed: Author Pattyegah Ikwue.
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