nironrik
Update please
Nice book. I'm following and waiting for the end. 163 chapters as at 24/03/2023
how could the villain get away with murder & kidnapping? there's a lot of loopholes with this story, not enough grovelling from the father and the ML
Great story at the beginning but the author has lost it big time. The evil plots, miseries, pain and suffering has just gone up a level which is very disturbing especially when kids are involved. Not prepared to sit thru another 50 chapters of the same crap.
This is an entertaining read. The start was intriguing and rather captivating, with a touch of darkness that added to the appeal. The book also incorporates humor, which lightens the mood. Fortunately, the drama isn't overly intense but effectively drives the narrative progression.
Finally I found a person who has read that gem I'd say so far in my book it is 10/10
Is there any training arc here? The protagonist just straight up getting powers at random chapters with almost no sense or any explanation at all so I was wondering if there was any kind of plot development where his progress is shown
blonde hair, blue eyes. i wonder who is cover girl ? rina / lina ? arwin ?
While this isn't terrible, it's fair to say it rates around 6.9 out of 10. If you're specifically seeking a harem novel, you might still enjoy it, but if not, I'd suggest exploring other options. The redeeming aspect of this book lies in the interactions between the main character (MC) and his wives, although, from my perspective, they could be more engaging. Everything else, from world-building to action sequences, is commendable. It's worth mentioning that the translation is well done, kudos to the translator.
You know...I have read till the latest chapter and will keep caughting up every time it updates,but this novel is just... so stupid,like,everything is convenient for the mc,well not everything but certain points,for example,the mc didnt do something since the start of the novel! why? no reason! even when it was easy,without any moral problems,without any side effects or consequences for it,he still wouldnt do it,but then suddenly his system gets a upgrade and now oh no! he gotta do it,if he doesnt do it,its gonna be bad!
There's also the fact that every like relevant character,even the lesser ones(like roswyn) conveniently ends up finding out things about him! which ends up developing certain things,which creates this feeling of like "oh hes so pitful!" throughout the novel
Talking about pitful,this novel really likes to make the mc suffer to make him act pitful and alone and sh*t throughout thenovel
Overall,its stupid,but its fun?like fastfood
12 chapters in, the story feels dull, it's all uneventful, anticlimactic, the writing is amateurish, overall I read and feel nothing even loot upgrade and boss fights are so undetaile, time skips results are being brushed off as if they went to another day in the office and the result is a disappointing salary.
Does this changes or its just turned off brain reading all the way? In level 25 every other novel in this website after three big bosses 2 world calamities and 5 achievements and they are only at the beginning of their ways fighting ancient deties...
It appears to be caught up, waiting on more chapters from Webnovel, WN is at 476, but only 470 appear to actually be on the website (i refuse to use the WN app, it's cringe)
