Thanks for answering I wrote this as a review because I didn't give you 5 stars on the other review.
Writing quality : 2/5Update stability: 4/5Story development : 1/5character design : 1/5World background: 1/5 meeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
I can't give a Good rating because it's not being updated...i'd like to give 1 Star in Everything but i can't blame the Author for unreliable Translation.
Author, I'm begging you please write a chapter. This is so good and has so much potential. I was so excited to see them do the photoshoot and him doing tournaments. Also, his streaming would've been fun.
I really like the book my man, keep up the good work
Great story! unique MC! it's really a good story wih potential of 2-3k chapters at least it's interesting and funny op mc who is a perv from born xD I really hope the author won't give up on this or it would be too disappointing >.<
it's a very good and interesting read, good work author, but was this dropped because there hasn't been any updates in awhile.. . .... .. .. .
apparently it's trash in the later chapters he apparently makes clones and they do the work instead of him I truly them since alot has said it and it has that feeling but just keep reading it maybe it's because of translation
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The writing is solid. Good grammar and almost no typos.However, there are few problems I have with the story. First of all, the protagonist himself. He's, for a lack of a better word, boring. He doesn't have a solid goal; he's just drifting. He does want to earn money, but he's not super motivated to do that either. He already has as stable job as a salaryman, so he doesn't need to earn money in-game. There isn't even a major plot line as far as I can tell. So the story is not character driven nor plot driven. It feels more a slice-of-life, but there is no feel-good or enjoying-life moment. He's just grinding.Maybe it will change later and I need to read on, but it's really difficult to stay invested if the protagonist himself is not invested in what he's doing. There's nothing to root for, no overarching mission or goal.This type of story isn't bad, but not my taste. Maybe it will fit better for readers who enjoy a loose storyline, and with emphasis on completing small missions rather than big quests.Secondly, the focus seems a bit off? The title and the synopsis makes it seem like the story will focus on his development as a Halo Paladin. However, the focus is on fishing and cooking. The first few battles are skimmed, and a boss battle comes around ch 15. Everything else is just him fishing and cooking.
after the first volume, the gender pronouns get mixed up and no longer become worth reading
I rly like this novel, got quite a few original takes, an original writing style, good character designs.what I was mostly surprised about is that the author seems to know his games, haven't rly seen any flaws that rubbed me the wrong way, which is pretty rare for a webnovel book, especially in the gaming genre.There are some lose ends in the story, development, world setting, but like I said no real flaws, it's gonna be the authors choice how he is gonna knot them up later. He also took up some other difficult approaches which shouldn't be easy to write flawlessly, but till now everything seems good. I,m really interested to see how this novel gonna develop.now... negative aspects, there aren't rly anything obvious, maybe the story progression is a little on the slower side. But something keeps constantly bugging me, the novel is rly amazing, but reading it is more like a relaxed read, it amazes me, but it doesn't make my blood boil, anticipate new chapters, burn with enthusiasm like some of the best reads of the hundreds I had. And I,m not quite sure where the problem lies. if it's the progression, or the battles, or the simple but on point writing style which makes it more relaxing.or maybe it's cuz the setting was a little vague and the happenings right now are all still mysterious and I couldn't build a connection yet.hmm... I think it's the last one. well let's see, I might update this in a few months :pgood luck author, keep it up