One of the few gaming novels out there with the MC taking a magic route instead of warriors/thief so i had high hopes for it. However, there is too little description that the story seems all over the place. It seems to me that the author has the image in his head but somewhat fails to transfer that into his writing. I don't need massive info dumps but the lack of details during battle as well as the surrounding area makes it hard to imagine what is going on. That in turn doesn't draw me into the story because i can't picture it.
It is still early so perhaps that will improve. I also hope we learn more about the world, real and in game. We don't know anything about the MC aside from the fact that he works in a company with beauties and a friend and that he is good at his class in a game to pay for his sister's medical bills.
right now, this is the type of novel you read if you got nothing else to read. or you skim through it because the little descriptions doesn't draw you in enough. i hope this improves because this does show potential.
literally a 12 year-old wet dream on crack
Don’t waste your time. The third arc suddenly has the chill MC claim that his only regret in current day is being unable to kill Japanese people. Completely insane nationalism shoved into an already prematurely ended waste of a novel. Had some good ideas but failed.
This is a really solid novel so far. The writing quality is great. The story, while a little confusing at first, explains itself over time. You can tell that it is well thought out and has a clear direction. The updates are godly. Maybe because it is TGIF today, but the author just released a lot of chapters. Again, if you want a good fantasy novel that is solid and unique, this is the place to be.
Rather interesting story, wish the author had continued it.
Love it, i love non human reincarnation. Can’t wait for more chapters to be posted. Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming.
Yeah, so this book, is a test, please be honest but not brutal, this is not an Eminem song, i think it's good for a novel, so please tell me what you think of it.
10/10 but I'm probably gonna mess up with ATG lore/world lel
I recommend that you read the cultivation / nen info so the chapters are easier to understand
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Okay. I like the story so far. Honestly there’s nothing bad I can say about the story so far. I personally enjoy stories that take place within VR or deep-dive games. The grammar is good. It’s early so I can’t say too much about plot.
Overall I rate the novel a 5 stars.
I love this! I’ve read one other book so far like this, but they differ in amazing ways possible!
Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister.
I’m intrigued.
An interesting take in the horror and thriller genre, this novel made me view the genre in a different light. I will be waiting for further updates! Also as another author I would like to suggest you to strongly convey the environment and internal thought process of the MC as well since a better link can be established with the reader-kuns! I will be supporting this novel and I have loved the current progress it has taken!
I really like this story so far. That take on the system genre is really unique, and I just really enjoy the atmosphere and characters. I really like Albrecht, he feels really relatable, and I really love those few moments of the comedic undertone. It's just very enjoyable all in all. I also love how the worldbuilding is slow and gradual, leaving that mystery but not dumping everything at you at once, it takes the 'show don't tell' route.
The writing quality is just a bonus really. Nearly no mistakes in the grammar or whatsoever, and the paragraph structure is smooth and lets you have an easy read-through and through. I really enjoyed this story, and I definitely am going to continue reading it.
All in all, 5/5, worth your time.