Kang XingThe main character in this novel, He managed to reincarnate in his own body after 200 years.And accompanied by the number five Villain system, the adventure of his life has begun again to avenge him.
I've read till chapter 78. This is my unbiased review. The story translation is better than most cultivation stories here. But the pacing is extremely slow killing any entertainment you can get from the story. But the weakest part of the story is the plot and world building is extremely weak IMHO.The plot can be summarized thus. The MC is someone without a spirit root, that can't raise their cultivation in the conventional manner. So he gets a golden finger and can raise the quality of pills and ingredients. He creates pills from waste materials that are created when pill concoction fails. And eats these pills to slowly raise his cultivation. That's it.Yeah if you consider the MC is wholly dependant on eating pills to cultivate, we expect alchemy or pill concoction to be a big part of the world building. But no, not only he doesn't know any pill concoction, the world doesn't have many different types of pills too. Like whole idea of pills is just a concentrated spirit energy that people take to speed up their cultivation. Extremely boring.Cultivation system is very weak and simplistic too. They just suck in spiritual energy (or qi whatever) , raise their cultivation level thus Qi amount. They use this Qi to use magical talismans , magical tools etc. As you can see, cultivation only makes their mana capacity higher to use limited use talismans or unlimited use tools. They don't have concept of different cultivation arts, styles, dao etc.Like where are the sword cultivators? Poison cultivators? Formation masters? Alchemists that can create more than concentrated Qi pills?Different dao? Space time powers?Yeah let me tell you where they aren't . This story.This is my review after 78 chapters.
I haven't read it but I just had to tell you that you're not going to get much readers with a synopsis like that. It's not detailed, interesting, or anything that grabs the attention of people who stop to see what you've got for a story. Good luck
The start of the story may be off putting to some people but the development is good. you gotta keep on reading if you wanna get to the good parts that'll keep you hooked.
This story is very compelling but I have this urge to help the author with his grammar or at least help him proofread this story!This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense. Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors. If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!
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a very nice game system story??. Can't wait till my boy gets super strong and starts bodying people left and right. I wonder if he will get a harem???
I hoped she would be a cute cat girl 5555+I love novels with a lot r18 stuff. Looks like she is good with the sword ;)I hope this goes on for a while :D Make 200 chapters haha
As of chapter 30, the story is looking really interesting and great. Normally I would not read sports novels sknce I find them boring but this one holds my attention.
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I've read some parts of the Novel and the synopsis seems like it takes aspects of many nonhuman novels and it's pretty safe to say with it having a demon king creation system he will eventually end up becoming powerful person now I'll just join the journey as rome was not built in a day a powerful person is also considered in that category you can find out for yourself if you like this novel bye seniors and juniors
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