I really like the story so far. The characters are also pretty good. I really like stories that have a lot of strategy in them so I'm exicted to see how that will play out in this story. The only problem I have is how small the stakes are for the MC. Becoming the student council president isn't a huge goal. If however he was doing with real life impact, I think it would be a lot more fun.
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literally trash....pure copy of MVS + 50% of previous chapters were being repeated + trash n timid mc
ok let me start by saying I like the idea and the fact there is not too much cliche that's a plus for me but the negative of this book is the fact that I can barely understand what is going on I seriously recommend getting an editor I tried reading it but it was tough like reading a mtl. so my review or constructive criticism is get an editor you need one bad but other than that I enjoyed the book
A great novel that seems to get alot of hate for no real reason, it has alot of filler but that is something almost every novel on this app has especially some of the more popular ones, another complaint I see often is that there are too many fight scenes? Idk what these people are smoking but I think you're in the wrong genre if you want infrequent combat, the way the story arcs of this novel work are a long journey, fraught with dangers and fights, a midway rest where danger reveals itself and they are forced back onto the path, and finally a falling action point where the characters can rest, grow, and get their affairs in order. Unlike other sword and magic novels the MC is not a sociopath and actually starts out as ***** child that gets taken advantage of easily, it takes quite some time before he's able to deal with others without getting the short end of the stick.Also there is no "cheat item" his badge is actually a very weak damaged magical item which judging by the pilot chapter never gets repaired, it's only ability is to completely drain the energy of whoever is in contact with it and only gives an extremely slight boost to elemental affinity in return. As for combat applications he can only use it against an enemy effectively when he is in a group and fighting against an individual, as it renders him immobile as well, he can also use it as a shield as before it was damaged it was a very powerful artifact. The only thing that could be considered a cheat is the potion he drank to become a mage, but made him only able to use water magic and it almost killed him. He only survived when he met a grade 9 mage, which is the current strongest rank of mage in the novel, who was willing to fix the problems with his body.
The granmer is above the average in webnovel.The updates are consistent.You charecter needs a lot of work. The charecter acts like a 13 Year old boy. who’s second chance at life did’t tought him anything. The charecter made referances of Mc systems but doesn’t understand why his system has a quirky personality.World building is big part of the story, so, far the setting of your story remains vague. Please go more in detail to understan The circumstances your charecter is under base on the locations he is. and please read a business book. Your charecter setting is a business, your buSiness Sense sucks, honestly.
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Very interesting idea that for the most part is put together well, good to see a character capatalising on being in such a high position. However the major complaint I have is that the main character barely tries to get rid of possible future threats while he has the chance by using his power. Someone who sees the MC as the problem always escapes, or the MC doesnt even try to kill them and obtain their treasure, or to be safer in the future. Disapointing given the premise.
Yo, Mr Writer, for your synopsis, wouldnt the final line "I'll make all the gods shiver before me" not work as hes a literal Fire Lord, so wouldnt "I'll make all the goods fear the flame" or "No God will ever be able to handle my heat" or sum, shiver, for a fire MC just dont fit in my mind??(** gave u 5 stars regardless 9f me not reading yet cause why not?)
This is a fresh idea and I’m thrilled how good this book will be so vote this book so that it comes out this/next week......................
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Ayo, Author time to work now or a massive update... will work properly...