I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.
Claims to be a system novel but doesn’t show the system, the whole point of a system is a visual representation of the MC’s growth without that it just looks like the MC is delusional.
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terrible editing terrible editing terrible editing terrible editing.You can barely tell what is happening in a chapter due to editing.terrible editing
Another copy-paste novel not sure whether i should read this or not.......?
Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author??
It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.
This is the first novel in this genre that i read. And I loved it. Author is a excellent writer. interaction between Mc and his family is Good and not forced.
great book . more pls , upload more quickly
Please write this kind of novel more.there are lots of wuxia novel but no realistic novel.i will support you with my best effort.love the novel?????????
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An action and adventurous story with fighting and funny scenes . I am kind of loving it.So far it's nice. Looking forward to more chapters.Keep the hard work and hoping you to undate more.