Loved it! I'd definitely recommend people to read this as this brings something original to the transmigration genre. The sibling duo idea was very original and I'd say that this book is really awesome as hell. I hope for future updates to come?
I'm tired of stories like these. I've read too many Modern CNs and most of them end up Polygamy now. It's ridiculous. MC will most likely not choose 1 but will choose both.If I'm wrong and you can spoil me a bit, that'd be nice.
I Officially Love This Novel, Well Built Character, Little Plot Holes. Very Readable English and Exceedingly Interesting Plot.What else does a man like me need, Please don't stop Author, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATTTEEE!Please???????????????
This was an utterly amazing book! It kept me on the edge of my seat and I fell in love with the characters. The author did a really good job of representing minorities without playing in to classic stereotypes. While I do wish the author developed the main villain a bit more at the end, overall it was a fantastic read and I highly recommend it.
Writing this review coz of author's request in the latest chapter. Well, up until this chapter, I can say with certainity that the novel is developing nicely. I look forward to it every day. Fortuantely, it has nice updating schedules with two or more chapters everyday.
Over all very good hooked from the first chapter well written
this has a been one of the more entertaining yandere novels I have read in a while.plz update soon
I’ll start by saying that what I read seems well written for the most part I rated the book low because There wasn’t a review pointing out a few items that I think are important. One of the auxiliary chapters talks about alignments, I got to chapter 42 and the MC seems closer to neutral evil to me as opposed to Chaotic Neutral. The MC seemed quite pleased with the despair exhibited by a character when she found food missing. Everything from the bait to the trap to me points to evil.Some people like evil MCs but I don’t, I can get behind the actions from the prologue but both interactions the MC had with people don’t seem neutral to me.Reminds me of a character from elsewhere, a great healer but while healing she would activate the pain receptors in her patients as she liked causing pain and it was her price for the healing. Obviously she was an antagonist.
UP to chapter 25. The subject is a bit dry, but it's well written and easy to read. The plot is a bit quick with technology and slower with the social aspect but fitting with the main caracter and this kind of story. For now, it's pretty good. Try it..............................................................
I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.
Muchas gracias por traer los capítulos, espero que puedas seguir publicándolos así sean dos capítulos por día. Está ha sido una de las mejores novelas que he leído, tiene algo que te engancha, y a mi criterio no es tan monótona.
• Writing quality ? 3*There’s room for development. The writing looks too superficial and not deep at all. I can’t seem the be hooked by the story. The writing style is more descriptive than narrative. • Story development ? 3*A good directive line but with lot of inadequacies, doesn’t feel like how people normally react and behave in those described contexts and situations. A lot of surprising developments but the bad kind of surprises, or maybe very badly written. We don’t feel a sense of flow. The events feels rushed and not finished, we pass from one to another without a sense of cohesiveness. • Character Design ? 1*The author want so badly the MC to be calculative, smart, funny or intelligent. But it’s gross, disgusting and totally the opposite. There’s no consistency in his personality and so his actions. Sometime he’s dumb or smart, calculative or emotional. We expect here one reaction but it’s totally the opposite. I don’t understand this MC, I can’t identify myself in him. I’m not that dumb and incoherent as a person. • World Background ? 3*There’s so much potential in that world background but the author completely messed it. He don’t seems to use that potential. The quality of story messed up the background. I want to know more about that world but not how the author brings it to us.Overall, a big disappointment. It could have gone so much better. I don’t know the author, his experience and age. But it looks very very immature. Sorry ?