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OMG very interesting story ❤️❤️❤️ I love the writing still and development plsssssssss keep updating ??
This book is really interesting, it has an interesting plot line and theme, the characters development is relatable and captivating. I really recommend this book
जो भी कसमें खायी थीं हमनेवादा किया था जो मिल केतूने ही जीवन में लाया था मेरे सवेराक्या तुम्हें याद हैक्या तुम्हें याद हैक्या तुम्हें याद हैदिन वो बड़े हसीन थेरातें भी ख़ुशनसीब थींतूने ही जीवन मेंलाया था मेरे सवेराक्या तुम्हें याद हैक्या तुम्हें याद है
the novel is pretty good and author doesa really good job in character design
Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work. Not bad, keep up the good work.
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I haven’t started reading but the story's blurb was captivating already!Well, on to chapter 1! :)
I don't know why this book has low likes and Colls because .... It's amazing, too good.I've only read up to five chapters but I can not explain how interesting the book is.Luci is exactly the characteristics of how a demon is supposed to. Strong despite having his demonic powers sealed, mindlessly killing his enemies without thinking twice... I can not get enough of him.I just hope he makes some friends though so that his journey won't be a boring one.
The first chapter is interesting, and Ethan’s story is off to a good start. His new life and emotions are well shown, but the scenes with his mother felt strange for a first chapter. A better warning or a slower build-up to these themes might help. Overall, I’m curious to see what happens next!
This is not just another shameless review of the author, let's say it's a wake-up call, continuing to write a story that seems to be disliked given the data that has been collected during this first month and a half of life is difficult, so without being the least bit ashamed I'm going to ask you: should I continue the story or should we send it to the drawer of novels that can't be continued?
Pretty good writing, the character is a bit flat at the moment and the story development is good. I think the beginining was a bit drawn out, but you get the reward pretty soon.I guess its a pacing issue? But it seems to stop being an issue later on. I'll see
That‘s is a nice story in the making.It will need some editing bc of some lost words and the other normal little prob‘s, but it’s a good read nonetheless.
